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Chapter 1 Elsa POV
"Check mate," I boasted, as a mischievous smirk crept on to my face as I moved my last standing statue beside her wooden king chess piece.
My sister sighed, " Elsa, that's no fair, you always win."
A small giggle came out of my mouth.

"Well it's not my fault you don't think ahead," I began to tease.
Anna yawned loudly as she stretched her arms out in a non lady-like fashion, "I wonder where Mavis went," she wondered, scratching her head, "She said she'll be back like two years ago!"
"You are so melodramatic Anna," I jokingly said, playing with my braid.

Just then the door swung open and an outraged Mavis stormed in, holding her right hand close. Her stomp sounded like a huge earth-quake had erupted.
"I've had it with this stupid city," she wailed pacing around the living room.
I stood up in concern when a red cloth on Mavis' hand caught my attention.
"Wait," I stopped her, "What the hell is that?"
My slender finger pointed at her bloodied hand, she turned to face her wound and rolled her deep brown eyes, "Oh, didn't I say,an idiot
came from a random alley and fricken bit me, I MEAN, WHO IN THIER STUPID FRICKEN MINDS DOES THAT!"

Her sentences became fragments of words and curses that I couldn't understand when she calmed, rubbing her temples. I came cautiously, highly alerted just in case Mavis would snap at me again. I offered my hand. Mavis began to unwrap the badly done bandage and put her hand out to show me.

Anna and I gasped in disbelief as we exchanged horrified looks.
Mavis' hand was barely recognisable, with teeth marks outlined in brown dry blood. Bruises the size of a large coin were scattered up her arm.
"Oh my...," my voice trailed on before I tenderly touched the unbearable-looking bite.
"Don't!" she screamed moving her hand quickly away from me.
I sprung back in surprise. Mavis never acts like this, i thought.
Anna walked beside me with her hands in front of her as if she is surrendering, "Calm down Mavy, you probably have a temperature, just a little sick, am I right...?"
She looked at me with a face that was asking for more reassurance.

"Yeah. Anna's right... Probably just a fever."

probably.

Anna POV
My heart was thumping fast as i walked over to Mavis. I raised a shaking hand to her forehead to check her temperature. As my pale hand touched her forehead i jumped back in shock. Her forehead was as hot as a volcano.
"OMG! You need help," I reported quickly as I saw Mavis' foot tapped impatiently.
"I'll call the ambulance while you go and rest," Elsa ordered,hurrying her roommate upstairs.

"Okay, Fine," Mavis replied, She turned to me and called over
"Oh and could you call Johnny and tell him i cant make it to dinner tonight,"
I giggled
"Sure Mavy."
Those were the last words we ever heard from her... Alive.
OoOoOo

"Don't you think its strange," Elsa blurted out, looking at me worriedly as she stood up from a dining chair.
"What is?" I asked finishing my cookie.
Elsa turned to around to face me. "That someone would just...Y'know...go around biting people."
I stared at my sister sympathetically, she had been friends with Mavis since High-school and was obviously worried about her. And I could just see tears start to drip from her blue eyes.
"Lets go watch the new season of Golden girls!" I said joyfully, trying to get my sisters mind off things.
Elsa smirked. "I heard that something big is happening this season Finally," she called back at me as she jumped onto the couch.
I followed her giggling.

We were watching the 'Golden girls' preform on tv as i heard a creak come from the Kitchen. I grabbed the remote and pressed pause.
"Did you hear that?" I asked Elsa as i leaned over the couch to see where the noise had come from.
The creaking noise came again slightly louder.
Elsa frowned, "It's probably just Mavis," she reassuringly replied as she tried to reach for the remote glued to my hands.
I stood up, i wanted to make sure it WAS Mavis, since she had left the front door open.


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