Hey guys! First time trying a story, please give me feedback. Is it good, bad, horrid?Should I continue? I have 9 other chapters already written.
Chapter 1:
Sam sat on the couch staring intently on the T.V.
"Sam, can you please help me with these kids!" Cat yelled while chasing Kiera, the 6 year old girl they were babysitting.
"Mhmm." Mumbled Sam while scooting even further to the edge of the seat.
"Sam!" Cat was getting annoyed, a 6 year old girl and an 8 year old boy was a handful for one person. Tyson, the brother of Kiera, pulled on Cats pantleg and tripped her.
"Haha!" both children laughed as they pointed at Cat sprawled out on the floor.
Ding. Their mother was here. Cat got up while holding tears back and opened their front door.
"Hey Cat! How was Kiera and Tyson? Did they give Sam and you any trouble?" Their mother asked politley.
"They were just a little hyper, nothing I couldnt handle!" Cat said pretending to be cheery.
"Great, heres the money I owe you. Thanks again Cat, and thank you too Sam" the mother said over Cats shoulder to Sam, who was still staring at the T.V.
"Uh-huh." Sam said vacantly.
The kids and their mother left & Cat slammed the door.
"Whoa what the hell was that for?" Sam said finally turning to Cat.
"Oh, look whos paying attention now!" Cat said huffing.
"Whats your problem Valentine?" She asked putting a handful of popcorn to her mouth.
"Right now? You! We were babysitting for 5 hours straight today and the whole time you were watching that stupid show!" Cat yelled.
"Woah woah, firstly, Toilet Run is not a stupid show. Second, there was a marathon on! You cant turn down a marathon of that show!" Sam jumped up off the couch and started running.
"Where are you going?" Cat asked.
"Bathroom break! The show will be back on any second, catch me again on commercial and talk to me then."
"Ugh!" Cat said stomping to their bedroom.