I know that some people might not like my format for how I write my stories (due to reviews I got for my first one.) But that is just how I'm more comfortable writing so try to be nice. For those of you who have read my start to 'Twins', no, I'm not abandoning it, and I know I should probably finish chapter two, but I got an idea and just HAD to write it!
So.... Enjoy!
The girl's breath puffed out in front of her as she darted through the forest in the dead of night, her feet making no sound. Crunching leaves and the occasional twig snapping was the only indication that she was being followed. Two giant gates loomed up ahead. 'Just a little farther, he can't get me once I pass the gates!' she told herself. She sped up and made it through the gates, but not before the man threw several kunai at her. She cried out in pain as several kunai hit her but she kept on going, stumbling into a ninja practice field.
Naruto had been training for six hours straight today, and he was ready to go home and flop down on his bed to rest for tomorrow, when a girl came stumbling out into the open. Naruto gawked at the girl. The girl in front of him had silver, knee length hair tied in a braid, that glittered in the moonlight. The battle dress she wore looked like It was made out of silk spider webs with a red tube top that stopped just above her belly button, and a pair of dark blue shorts underneath. Her eyes were a startling yellow, and betrayed fatigue. The most surprising feature that this new girl had was, by far, the fact that, instead of feet, she had horse hooves!(1) He was startled out of his revelries when he heard her gasp. "Help." as she fell to the ground.
Naruto rushed over and lifted her up, noticing that she was still conscious, he asked her urgently, "What's your name?"
She looked up at him and whispered, "Megumi Kazuko Amaya."(2) as she feinted. With that, her rushed the girl, now dubbed Megumi, to the hospital.
(1)- When I say she has horse hooves, I imagine a satyr (½ goat, ½ human) but with elegant horse hooves instead!
(2)- Megumi (her first name) means Blessing/Kindness. Kazuko (her middle name) means peace child. And Amaya (her last name) means Night Rain! So Megumi Kazuko Amaya = Blessing/Kindness Peace child Night rain!
Now, I need help deciding on a language. My ideas are either,
Latin
German
French
or any language you can come up with!
PLEASE VOTE!