K you guys, this is my first fic. PLEASE tell me how you like it. J

Ages:
Trunks: 21
Pan: 17
Bra: 17
Goten: 19

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Pan got up quickly, to avoid showing she was hurt. She wanted to spend as much time as possible in Trunks' company. Being with him meant everything to her.
"Hey, getting tired?" Trunks yelled to her with a bit of a smirk.
"No way!" Pan yelled back, as she regained her balance and took her stance. The sparring lesson in her dad's back yard was almost over. She sprang forward at him, ready for a right hook. Trunks ducked, and went for a thrust kick to her stomach. Pan was blown back once again, but only for a second. This time, she went for his legs; balancing on one hand and tripping him with her right foot. Trunks fell, but so did Pan; she lost her balance on her hand and landed next to him on her back.
Pan turned bright red.
Without noticing Pan's embarrassment, Trunks got up and said, "Whaddya say we call that a day?"
"Alright." Pan said quietly, sitting up. How she wished she could force more words than that out of her mouth.
Trunks helped her up. "So I guess I'll see you again tomorrow," he gave her one last smile and headed back to Capsule Corp. "Bye!"
"Bye." Pan turned around to go back in the house, disappointed in herself that she let another day go by without telling him how she felt. Nearing the house, she noticed that her father, Gohan, was looking out the window, with a worried look on his face. Pan wished he would lighten up a little about Trunks, he was the nicest person Pan had ever known.

THE NEXT DAY

The phone rang. "Hello?" Pan answered. It was Bra.
"Hi Pan, wanna go clubbing with me tonight? Goten is coming… and so is Trunks…" she teased.
"Really?"
"Yup, he is."
"Ok, I'm there. How 'bout 8:00?"
"K. Meetcha there! I gotta go now. Bye."
"Bye." Pan hung up the phone and looked through her closet madly, only to find her same old tomboyish clothes, nothing sexy enough to go to a club with. Except… Pan pulled out a light blue studded tube top and a super short white leather skirt from the back of her closet. She'd bought the outfit a while ago, with Bra, but never expected to wear it. She bought it simply for the satisfaction of knowing that she had something sexy to wear.

THAT NIGHT, AT THE CLUB:

Trunks and Bra were already there when Pan arrived. When she stepped out of the car, Pan's eyes were immediately drawn to Trunks.' He could barely believe his eyes, and it pleased Pan to know so by the expression on his face. Bra noticed it to and snickered. (Obviously, he'd never seen Pan dressed like this before.) Seeing Trunks for any reason besides training was enough to blow her mind! So she strutted over to them, making sure Trunks had a good view. When she made her way over to the two, she clung like static to Bra, for fear of embarrassing herself in front of Trunks, who was to the right. Bra gave Pan a shove, crashing her into Trunks. Bra could only stare at the two and laugh, while Pan turned bright red. Trunks glanced at her sister obnoxiously, and then at Pan, who was now right next to him, and blushed.
"Sorry…" said Pan, regaining her balance. Trunks helped her up by the arm.
"No, it's ok."
Pan turned her head up to see the expression on his face: a playful smirk, and Pan could tell now that he wanted her bad. (Why would he come anyway, if he was just going to be with Goten and Bra?)
Then Goten arrived, and everyone went inside.

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Well that's the end of my first chapter. I want at least a few reviews to tell me how I'm doing until I start the next chapter.