Breathe and Stop
Mystic25
My OWN challenge..write for ONLY ten minutes on the first DA thing that comes into my head..
Disclaimer: title is a song by Q-Tip on his "Amplified" album, DA isn't mine either
A/N: This is kinda poetic..kinda..the third party voice is me as a narrator. The nameless man in here is Logan..sorry M/A people.
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Take a breath,
Just breathe soldier, feel the air, pushing into your lungs
Feel the light, hard and bright on your face.
Hear the voices, those loud shouts, all calling for you, all demanding you to breathe.
They breathe, breathe because you stop.
Their hands are on you, calling you names, friend, soulmate. Some of them aren't even spoken out loud. But they call you just the same.
Breathe in breathe out, it's not that hard.
The light is nice, but the light is lulling, taking you away from your mission.
It's not your time to go, Ben will understand. Eva will wait.
Don't leave the earthbound to miss you with only paper pictures to remember you for eternity.
Fight for it, you know you can, you were raised this way.
You are a solider Maxie, now and forever.
Breathe in breathe out dammit..
He's calling you back, he's touching you, mouth on yours, but he's not kissing you.
You want him to kiss you, then open your eyes.
Breathe, and don't stop.
The battle isn't over
You're not meant to flicker like this
Like a candle that's snuffed out by the slightest breath
So what's it gonna be?
Breathe in breathe out..
There is no other chance.
He breathes in again.
This time you listen,
You choke, gasp, squint at reality staring you back in the face
He's touching your face again, but in emotions, relief. He would kiss you if he more control now.
Still he touches you, he tells you its fine, even though it sometimes is a lie
And the you breathe out.
*****
Done, ten minutes flat. If you didn't understand it well, let me break it down.
Max stopped breathing somehow. Logan was giving her CPR. I, as the narrator describe what Max must do, open her eyes and live. That's about it.
R/R please
Mystic..who's WORKING on "Choices" okay..i wrote for an hour today..but I have this pesky thing called studying for my final exams that got in the way
Mystic25
My OWN challenge..write for ONLY ten minutes on the first DA thing that comes into my head..
Disclaimer: title is a song by Q-Tip on his "Amplified" album, DA isn't mine either
A/N: This is kinda poetic..kinda..the third party voice is me as a narrator. The nameless man in here is Logan..sorry M/A people.
****
Take a breath,
Just breathe soldier, feel the air, pushing into your lungs
Feel the light, hard and bright on your face.
Hear the voices, those loud shouts, all calling for you, all demanding you to breathe.
They breathe, breathe because you stop.
Their hands are on you, calling you names, friend, soulmate. Some of them aren't even spoken out loud. But they call you just the same.
Breathe in breathe out, it's not that hard.
The light is nice, but the light is lulling, taking you away from your mission.
It's not your time to go, Ben will understand. Eva will wait.
Don't leave the earthbound to miss you with only paper pictures to remember you for eternity.
Fight for it, you know you can, you were raised this way.
You are a solider Maxie, now and forever.
Breathe in breathe out dammit..
He's calling you back, he's touching you, mouth on yours, but he's not kissing you.
You want him to kiss you, then open your eyes.
Breathe, and don't stop.
The battle isn't over
You're not meant to flicker like this
Like a candle that's snuffed out by the slightest breath
So what's it gonna be?
Breathe in breathe out..
There is no other chance.
He breathes in again.
This time you listen,
You choke, gasp, squint at reality staring you back in the face
He's touching your face again, but in emotions, relief. He would kiss you if he more control now.
Still he touches you, he tells you its fine, even though it sometimes is a lie
And the you breathe out.
*****
Done, ten minutes flat. If you didn't understand it well, let me break it down.
Max stopped breathing somehow. Logan was giving her CPR. I, as the narrator describe what Max must do, open her eyes and live. That's about it.
R/R please
Mystic..who's WORKING on "Choices" okay..i wrote for an hour today..but I have this pesky thing called studying for my final exams that got in the way