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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ANYTHING THAT YOU ARE FAMILIAR TOO!

Dark shadows were cast across the walls as a man smoothly crossed the hallway. It was late and he was hungry. Saturdays were usually full of life in the dorm rooms, but tonight every thing was still. He glanced around his surrounding as he sensed movement in a room nearby. Someone that was still not asleep was stirring. The man, Itachi, tensed knowing it would be dangerous if he were to be caught.

"Out, again?" a blond man smirked. "So you are the one who's stirring up trouble?" he chuckled.

"Deidara, you have not eaten in weeks, aren't you thirsty?" Itachi questioned him with a suspicious look. " You have to go out for once and enjoy life..."

"Well I haven't indulged on it lately but I may join you tonight..." Deidara replied mischievously. "But I usually like the art of the kill, more than the product of the kill itself. But it is still very rewarding..."

"Is someone there?" a small, sleepy voice asked, from just down the bend in the hall. Deidara smirked as he gracefully hid himself behind a recycling bin. Itachi hid on the opposite side of the hallway in another corridor that branched of the main one. It was pitch dark but he could see a girl with long pink hair coming their way. She wore a lime-green, over-sized shirt that said "You Aren't My Boyfriend" and white short-shorts. She smelled good to Itachi and her pulse was steady. She seemed to sense a presence of somebody and straightened up. Her breath hitched as she fell onto the floor injuring her knee.

"I would advise you to show yourselves!" she groaned as her knee throbbed from hitting the hard linoleum floor. See cocked her head to each side to glance around. Her eyes slowly focused, but she'd wished they had not. In front of her were two tall men. She was only about ¾ their size and worse they looked fierce. She slowly crawled backwards, the stillness in the air had a creepy feel to it. Sakura the girl on the floor felt like yelping for help though it would do her no good. Itachi suddenly disappeared, this sent shock thru Sakura as she realized Itachi was behind her. She grunted her disapproval and tried grabbing his legs from behind her. He dodged and pulled her back on her feet. Itachi held Sakura's arms.

"So you lose, girl." Itachi whispered into her ear. The hot breath of Deidara on her neck was unsuspected by Sakura, "What are they?! Who are they? I wish it was not so dark! If only I could see their faces!" She opened her eyes wide as Deidara licked her neck. The feeling sent a shiver down her spine. What was he going to do? Suddenly, Deidara bite her neck and she fell limp into Itachi's arms.

"You taste good..." Deidara started feasting on her blood but Itachi stopped him soon.

"Why don't I have a taste? Well maybe later... it seems she only has a few pints of blood left and I want more than that!" Itachi smirked as he glared at Deidara.

"OK, OK I'll let you have some later..." Deidara regretfully handed Sakura to Itachi. "Itachi where is her dorm anyways? We need her to get there before morning..."

"It's next to my little brother's so lets go..."

Sakura awoke the next day in her bed, but she could've sworn she had left her dorm room and not returned... she didn't feel well but dressed for school anyways. Since she was only a few weeks into high school she didn't know everybody even though some had been childhood friends. After school she would usually hang out at the cafe or do something relaxing. Today was a friday and she wanted to go shopping at Hot Topic with her good friend, Ino.

The school bell rung signaling the end of school. Itachi and a group called Akatsuki were hosting a meeting at the mall so he hustled to get out the door toward the parking lot of the school. He turned the ignition for his Porsche, it roared to life and it slowly died down to a low purr. Itachi offered Deidara a ride to the mall but Deidara soberly rejected it with the excuse of some errands and chores. He raced to the mall and parked in an empty section of the lot. He slowly calmed down and waited for the call of his friends. Then he saw her, the bubblegum haired girl...