Into a Brand New World
Chapter 1: Black Out: Rewritten
Disclaimer: Do not own Pokemon only the games, etc.
My name is Vincent Raven Valentine. I am your normal 14 year old teenager here. Living in Richlands, North Carolina. I am 5' 9" and I weigh 102 lbs. I deal with normal things like teachers, drama AKA girl problems, etc. Right now is the last day before spring break. Right now though, I'm in my 4th Period class drawing some Pokemon actually. Infact I'm drawing a Chimchar right now. And it is going GREAT. I've gotten all the color blends and combinations correct making it look like an actual Chimchar! As I took up my colored pencil one more time I noticed something. My sketchbook was gone. I turned to my friend Skye, and he pointed forward and I saw my teacher, Mrs. McAllister walking away flipping pages. I sighed and finished my work and the bell rang as I finished. I walked to her desk and she handed it to me.
"Vincent you've got to stop drawing in class. Don't get me wrong they're good, but there's a time and place for everything ok?" She said. I nodded and accepted the sketchbook and quickly put it in my bookbag and ran out the door after wishing her a good weekend. I got on my bus and sat in my seat taking out my colored pencils and sketchbook. As we started driving down the road I nearly finished my Chimchar sketch as it was violently taken from my hands by a local bully. Christopher Smith AKA Chris. He looked through it and laughed.
"What the hell are these?" He asked laughing. I growled and tried to snatch the sketchbook back.
"Drawings." I said as he held it away from me laughing. Dammit this was annoying me!
"Yeah of what? Pokemon?" Chris asked.
"..." I said nothing. Then he grinned and next thing I know I hear, "RIP!" and he shows me the notebook torn in half. My eyes widened and I felt myself getting angrier by the second. He laughed at me.
"Is baby gonna cry?" He mocked me. The next stop was mine. Don't let him-
"You look like you're gonna cry! Come on baby cr-" His sentence was stopped short as I punched him square in the nose. He reeled back holding his nose and I got off radiating an evil aura. Finally I'm away from there. The worst place a teenager could know. I got in the house and into my room and sighed puttign down my bookbag. I was alone. I opened my dresser drawer and pulled out a metallic case, almost like a briefcase. Opening it inside was a Cosmo Black DSi and assorted games each inside a case. I grabbed a bright blue case and the DSi and opened the case and set the games on my dresser. Pokemon. Pokemon White, Black, Platinum and Pearl. Pokemon was the only thing that could get my mind off a...stressing day like this. I closed my eyes and grabbed a random game and opened my eyes. The game I had in my hand was Pokemon Platinum. I had actually recently bought Pokemon White and Platinum. I took out my Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin and inserted Pokemon Platinum and turned on the DSi. I quickly went to the main screen of the game which was where Giratina was in its origin forme. I then pressed A and found myself dizzy as I blacked out.
Chapter 1 End!
This chapter is actually a rewrite as shown above in the chapter name. It WAS too short and well I just basically thrown in a kid without any knowledge of him whatsoever. I hope that this helps you to...get to know him a bit. But anyway my original promise. I promise that the next chapter will be longer! I swear it!
OC Form.
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance: For those who don't know it's what you look like
Personality: Again for what you battle style, likes, etc.
Type: Coordinator, Trainer, Elite Four, Champion, etc.
Hometown and Region: Region can be made up give me a description of it though.
Accomplishments: Competing in the Pokemon League Tournament, Grand Festival, you should get the point.
Goals: What your OC wants to accomplish.
Crush: Optional. Who does your OC like? Again optional.
Swimming Clothes: Optional
Party clothes: Optional.
Pokemon: Any pokemon from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, or Sinnoh. Any made up pokemon from any other region tell me about it. Where does it live, how does it live, what does it eat, how does it sleep. If not created tell me when you captured, found, or hatched it. Tell the gender, if there is anything different like shiny or taller than most of its species, attacks, nicknames, names, species, and type are needed in any order. Nicknames are not needed but optional. I'll allow 1 legendary and 1 shiny per OC! It's okay if they're both.
Other: What ever else you want to tell me. Favorite food, color, drink, etc.
Have fun!