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disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who or Torchwood i only own this story and the girl although i do wish i could own David Tennant for a few days xx
CHAPTER 1
Captain Jack Harkness And The Girl
Captain Jack was asleep in the Torchwood Hub. It was 11 o'clock and after saving the world once again who could blame him for wanting to sleep.Trying to find a Weevil in a town like this Cardiff was hard work and it was even harder when Mickey Smith was still shocked by how much Torchwood could do.
At 11:30pm Jack was woken by the stange feeling someone was watching him. He opened his eyes and had to close them again when he saw a bright glow. Jack rubbed his eyes and looked again this time he saw a girl (who looked about 15) standing in front of him. She had blonde hair and her eyes glowed a strange yellow/gold. The same yellow/ golden glow outlined her body and jack saw she was wearing yellow clothes.The girl was crying and the tears glittened because of how she glowed.
"you will see him again. The man with no name. The man who has a face which changes again and again. He will come to you. Tell him this...
She is coming. Born from the stars.
Controling time and space. She will find The Doctor.
And together they will save the worlds.
Tell him, Captain. Tell him its a message from the stars.
She said this in a peaceful way. A calm voice that could send shivers down your spine. After she finished she raised her hands in the air and vanished. Leaving Jack looking very confused and scared.