Authors Notes:
Right this is my first proper fan-fiction, so please don't judge. I'm not a very confident writer but thought I'd give it ago. So I know there's loads of Candor or Dauntless fan-fictions out there, but considering it's my first I thought I'd try an easier story line. Well I'll try to update every other day, but can't promise anything. This story takes place, before Four/ Tobias and Tris get together, Christina and Will aren't dating either and everybody else is single;) Al has already died, and obviously Will is still alive, no war* (not good at things like that) so hope you like it, read and review please x
TRIS' POV:
"Hey girls!", Uriah shouted, half way down the other end of the hallway. Christina had just forced me into going shopping with her; I protested for hours on end, but finally gave in to her annoying but slightly comforting nagging. It's was nice to know that I have such a good friend like Christina. Back in Abnegation the only girl friend I had was Susan and she wasn't the type of person which you actually tell secrets or gossip with. Before we went shopping Christina said we had an occasion to get dressed up for. Nonetheless, she didn't let me in on the secret event, but I'm starting to guess it's a big one because we were shopping for what felt like forever.
"Hi", we replied almost in time.
"So Christina still up for the game of Candor or Dauntless at Zeke's tonight?"
"Yeah, I am"
"How about you Tris?"
I had to think about it for a minute. I had no idea what Candor or Dauntless was, I figured it was a type of game or something. Giving that nobody ever played games in Abnegation, as it was classed as selflessness, I wasn't familiar with it. But debating whether to go or not wasn't in the question. I'm in Dauntless now and if this is what Dauntless members do for fun, then I have to too.
"Oh come on don't be a paneycake!" Uriah loved that phrase, no-one else did.
"Sure I'll come, but please stop saying that it's never going to catch on."
"Great and it will trust me,"
Sounding frustrated Christina said, "Ok bye Uriah, Tris and I need time to get ready, we'll be at Zeke's at 7?"
"Yeah, and don't be late!"
"Can't promise anything can we now." Christina managed to slip in just before I could say anything. That's the only thing that frustrated me about Christina. She always had to speak her mind, guess that her old faction still stayed with her a little. Mine has never left my side.
"Bye Chris, bye Trissy" Uriah said in his stupid childish voice. He knew I hated being called Trissy that was the only thing I hated being called, but I guess it's a lot better than being called a stiff.
As soon as Uriah left, Christina pushed me into her apartment and started unpacking all the stuff we'd bought earlier today.
"This one's nice, put this and this and this on please" She chucked all the items of clothing at me one by one. "Oh and you'll need to wear these too," She passed me a light pink bra with lace round the outer-edge and some matching underwear.
"No I refuse to put this on!"
"Tris, if you have to strip down to your underwear, you'll want to look good."
"Why would I strip?"
"Have you never played Candor or Dauntless have you? Well you are from Abnegation, so I'll explain, if you don't answer or complete the dare you are given, you have to take off an item of clothing,"
"What? I don't want to go then,"
"Oh come on Tris, there only gonna be a few of us, anyway everybody has to do it and trust me you won't be the first person to have to take off something in a game of Candor and Dauntless with Uriah and Zeke,"
"Ok" I announced unenthusiastic, which I guess Christina didn't notice because she just told me to go get changed again.
I walked into the bathroom and started to look at the clothes she gave me. There was a loose black tank top, with the letter T spread across the chest, a pair of tight black leggings and a nice jacket. Even though I hated going shopping with Christina, she did have a gift for things like this. After I put on all the clothes I walked straight out of the bathroom, Christina bombarded me with make-up and hair accessories. Finally when she was done I looked in the mirror. Not believing it was me I moved my hand up and down. It was me. That girl has Super powers!
"Wow Tris you look amazing!"
"Your so good at these things Christina!"
"No time for that it's already 6:45 and we still have to get to Zeke's,"
Just before we left Christina picked up some extra accessories and make up essentials and put them into her purse. I started to wonder who was actually attending, what if Four was there? Oh no, I couldn't get undressed in front of him, I was so skinny and limp and most of all ugly, and he was well…Four. The gorgeous instructor, who took no notice in me and if he's there tonight I hope that's what he does, Takes no notice.
That's it so far, hope you enjoyed it. I'll update in a few days. If anybody has any ideas about dares or truths i could use in the next chapter comment please? Thank guys x