Hi guys! this is my 1st fanfic and i would be delighted to have people review and comment on how i did! ill update ASAP when i have the time. I hope u all enjoy the introduction chapter :D oh and other chapters should be longer than this one.
The normally peaceful village of Konoha was in turmoil. People ran about screaming as giant fireballs scorched the village. Shinobi of all ranks ran about, trying to clam the villagers. The leader of the village, the Yondaime Hokage was no where to be predecessor, the Sandaime Hokage was currently leading the forces of Konoha against the strongest of the Bijuu (Tailed beast), the Kyuubi. The shinobi forces were being decimated by the Kyuubi's powerful attacks, and though they relentlessly continued their assualt on the Kyuubi, they knew it was futile. As more shinobi hit the ground dead, the rest were getting more and more disheartened to fight invincible opponent.
A giant puff of smoke filled the air as the Kyuubi found itself on the boss toad with the Yondaime on top of it stood proudly on top of the enormous kitsune."Sorry I'm late. I hope your not all dead."The Yondaime voiced of the shinobi would have sweat dropped at the man's lame joke at the time if they were not fearing for their any response was heard, a loud 'Hiraishin' was heard throughout the battlefield. A yellow flash blinded even the most experienced ninja, and when it died out, the toad, Kyuubi nor the Yondaime were found anywhere.
Minato Namikaze(Yondaime Hokage)was currently facing of with the giant kitsune a few miles away from his beloved village. He knew that he could not win the fight, and with a heavy heart knew what he had to do. His newborn child, Naruto had entered the world only few minutes prior, and was currently waiting at Konoha with his mother and Minato's wife, Kushina Uzumaki. Said red-head was currently resting with Naruto with her arms, ragged breaths escaping her mouth. As if she could feel it, she knew what her husband was going to do. Before anything, both her son and her suddenly disappeared in a bright yellow flash .Kushina opened her eyes only to find that naruto was on a pedestal used for the eight tetragram sealing method, and the Shinigami was currently behind Minato, his arm through Minato and piercing through her former prisoner, the Kyuubi. She yelled for him to stop, but to no avail. Her heart was crushed as she saw her husband seal the nine-tails into Naruto, marking him as a jinchuriki for the rest of his life.
Kushina,as a former jinchuriki knew what it was like. To be left alone, and saw at as a demon. Tears threatened to break free as she witnessed her husband's soul get sacrificed and the Kyuubi being sealed into Naruto. Her maternal instincts propelled herself forward as she saw the Kyuubi with its last ounce of strength try to pierce its finger through Naruto. Minato, together with Kushina threw themselves in front of the nail, however, Minato gathered his strength, and pushed Kushina out of the way, before the nail pierced through the already soulless body of Minato Namikaze, saving their only cried in his mother's embrace as his cries rang into the night .Kushina's only gratitude towards her late husband was that he pushed her out of the way, to be able to live with her only son, not leaving him alone as a jinchuriki without anyone caring about him. Being a seasoned shinobi, Kushina did not want to show weakness by crying, however she couldn't withstand the grief in her heart, crying silently as low sobs could be heard. The Sandaime Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi was running with a group of elite ANBU to help Minato fight the beast. He was greeted by a sight of destruction as well as a sobbing Kushina with a baby Naruto in her hands, a Shiki Fujin seal located around his stomach. He had a gut feeling that Minato did something any father should never do, place a burden so great on his child, that almost no grown man could take. With a heavy heart, he silently ordered to take Kushina and her son, Naruto, back to the Namikaze compound.
Kushina awoke only 2 days after the ordeal, still shaken by the death of her late husband and the fact that her eldest child was now a jinchuriki, a power of human sacrifice just as she once was till the masked man pulled it out of her. Her child cried out, breaking Kushina's silence. Kushina quickly gave Naruto some milk to drink as she wondered off in thought.
So review please and if there are any spelling or grammer errors please tell me and ill correct them as soon as i can. I hoped you enjoyed the first chapter of my fanfic, Bye.