Thalia120: YaY! I'm doin my first one piece fanfic! (jumps for joy)
Zoro:Holy crap we're screwed!
Luffy:why you say that Zoro?
Zoro: you moron! for all you know she might let us do somethin stupid!Luffy:like what?
Zoro:make us sing a justin bieber song
Thalia120:(smiles evilly) never thought of that thanks for the idea Zoro
Sanji:Look what you did! Now we have to sing that crap! Mosshead!
Zoro:She was goin to do that anyway!
Thalia120:oh you know me so well!
Zoro:(points at her ) See!
Thalia120:i might kill Nami off though
Sanji: What why kill Nami-swan! (cries)
Zoro:good ridance
Sanji:(kicks zoro)
Zoro:Why you! (Begin fighting)
Luffy: (looks at Thalia120)
Thalia120: what?
Luffy: (Looks at readers) She owns nothing of One piece
Thalia120:not yet anyway(begins evil planning)
Zoro:(walks away from Thalia slowly)
Sanji: (follows)
Thalia looks at the two.
Thalia:If you take another step I'll take those swords and u can't ever see Nami or Robin!
Chapter 1
May 5
A young 7 year old with raven black hair that was under a strawhat and deep brown eyes was running. He wore a white shirt that said Anchor in red letters with blue shorts and sandals. He wore a huge smile on his face. "Luffy get back here!" yelled two other kids. One which was a boy around 10 chasing the strawhat. He had raven black hair that was longer than the other boy's he also had brown eyes and freckles on his face, he wore a red shirt with blue shorts. The other kid was girl also 7, she had whire short hair that stopped at her shoulders and sky blue eyes that went with her tan skin, she wore a dark red mini dress with black shorts under and sandals. The girl was laughing next to the older raven while trying to get to the strawhat. "Luffy!" Luffy laughed at his brother and ran faster.
Ace was trying to warn Luffy about the old hag that was less then 5 minutes away. The people in the village said she was cruel and horrible. He didn't tell the other two about because knowing them they would go there anyway. Ace was worried about Luffy since Luffy had the thing about getting himself in trouble.
"Luffy lets go back!"
Luffy ignored his brother and kept running. Suddenly he tripped and fell into a garden, crushing many of the flowers in the process. "Ow!" Luffy was about to stand when he notised that the sun wasn't on him anymore. He looked up to see a old woman in a brown coat and glared at Luffy. "Your horrible little boy! You destroyed my beautiful garden!" Ace and the girl froze when they saw they old woman speak to Luffy. The girl grabbed Ace's arm in fear. Ace took a step forward, the woman looked up. "Get any closer and then all of you will be punished!" Ace was about to walk even closer but Luffy shook his head. Ace put his foot back down and the girl never took her eyes from Luffy. The hag looked back at Luffy and gave an evil smirk that sent shivers down his back. "I know the perfect punishment for you" She suddenly grabbed Luffy's arm and pulled him up from the ground. Luffy being a rubber boy he didn't feel any pain but he yelpped in surprised, the hag placed her hand in the middle of Luffy's back with a strange white glow in her hand then it went blood red. Luffy's eyes opened wide showing that he was in pain and he screamed. Ace and the white haired girl tried to get the hag to let Luffy go but their feet wouldn't move. The hag laughed at their efforts the yelled. "Kare no ju hachi-nen ni shizzo o hakai suru" Luffy"s eyes rolled back and he was knocked out, the hag dropped him to the ground and sent a smirk to the other to children what a look of horror on their faces. "I gave 11 more years. Enjoy them while you can" With that said the woman turned at walked back into her horrible run down shack. Ace and the white haired girl ran to Luffy. "Luffy! Luffy!" Ace yelled trying to shake him awake the girl was about to sit Luffy up abit and her eyes widened. "Ace" She whispered. "Look at this" Ace looked at her with confusion but Ace went to where she was sitting. Ace looked in more horror. On Luffy's back was horrible burn mark surrounded by ancient looking words. The burn mark looked like a huge black 11, the white haired girl was in tears and Ace look down in shame that he wasn't able to stop the damn old hag.
Three days passed, Mikino watched the two stay with Luffy for three days not leaving his side. Not once did they leave his side unless they were going to the bathroom or to get food always bring some for Luffy if he woke up, but he didn't. One the fourth day Ace and the white haired girl were sitting next to Luffy's bed and were a sleep. Mikoto wrapped bandages on him and put some medicine to see of the burns will go but they stayed.
A groan came out of the 7 year old boy that was on the bed. Luffy blinked a couple times and slowly sat up because he felt the pain in his back which he was shocked that his back hurt so much. He didn't even remember why it hurt, he did remember that he fell in a garden and killed some flowers then a old hag wanted to punish him and blank. Luffy looked at the two and got of the bed quietly not to wake them up. Luffy walked too the bathroom and grabbed a chair since he won't be able to the mirror because of the his height. Luffy slowly took of his shirt and looked at the bandages on his back, Luffy took them off gently and saw the burn marks and the strange words. Luffy didn't say anything, he touched the burn softly and flinshed. Luffy rebandaged his burns and put his shirt back on, he was about to get some food when suddenly the scar on his back suddenly burned but not enough to cause much pain. "Makino! Can I have some food?" That black haired woman looked at Luffy in shock then relief. She ran and hugged Luffy. "Luffy! Your awake!" Luffy hissed when her hug tighted.
"Oh sorry"
"How long was I sleep Mikoto?" Mikoto touched his hair gently.
"Almost 4 days" Luffy was abit surprised then yelled in horror
"OH NO! I SKIPPED 12 MEALS!" Mikoto laughed and stood. "I'll make you some right now! Now go tell Ace and Yuki your awake!" Luffy gave his 1000 watt smile and nodded. He ran back up stairs and saw that his brother and Yuki were awake. "Hey guy-" Before he could continue they ran to him and hugged him gently. "Luffy your ok!"
"Your finally awake!"
"That old hag put that scar on your back!"
"Does it hurt!"
"W-" Luffy pushed the two. "I'm ok! No need to worry! Anyway Makino is making food! Lets go!" Ace and Yuki watched as Luffy ran out once more and looked at each other. "Why doesn't he care about the burns they must hurt!" Stated Yuki with a bit of saddness.
"Remember its Luffy, he won't tell us that he is in pain. He is probably mad at himself for making us worried"
"I know but still... what did that lady do to him anyway?" Ace thought for a moment. "What were the words she said?"
"Kare no ju hachi-nen ni shizzo o hakai suru. Those were the words" Ace shrugged. "I'll ask Gramps when he comes back"
"O-ok"
A year later, May 5
Ace, Yuki, and Makino were outside of Luffy's room with a huge cake. Makino looked at the two with a small smile with her hand she count back from three. When she hit zero all three jumpped into his room. "Happy bir-" The three looked at Luffy, Luffy was in his bed sweating and breathing harshly. He was sitting up holding his stomach and his white shirt showed blood on his back,luffy looked like he was going to throw up. Notising this Yuki ran out to look for a bucket. Ace and Mikoto ran to Luffy. Ace placed his hand on Luffy's head and he pulled his hand back as quickly as touched it. "Ow! His burning hot" Makino pulled up Luffy's shirt and looked at his scar. Ace looked at it and his eyes widened. The 11 that used to be there was now turning to a 10, and by turning I mean the one looked like a slow snake turning intoa zero. It seemed like that the way it was turning into a zero that it was causing him to bleed.
Yuki ran in with a bucket and gave it to Luffy. Without a second thought Luffy grabbed the bucket and vomited. Makino ran out and came back quickly with a wet cloth and bandages. When she pressed to wet cloth on his back to wipe the blood away Luffy yelled in pain. "Ah!" Yuki took his arm trying to comfort him, Ace wiped the sweat away. Finally Makino wiped all the blood away, she gently placed the bandages on his back. When she was done Luffy slowly laid back down and closed his eyes, still breathing harshly. "You better Luffy?" asked the white haired girl. Luffy opened his eyes abit and nodded trying not to worry her much. "I-I'm fine" Makino smiled sadly and grabbed the cake, she took a small piece and put it on a plate. "Happy birthday!" Luffy looked up at them and smiled weakly. Ace and Yuki sang 'Happy birthday' even though they were all worried.
"Happy 8th birthday lil bro!"
"Happy b-day Anchor!"
"Thanks Ace. Thank you Yuki!" Luffy ate the small piece and fell asleep. "Stupid old hag! Its her fault" Stated Ace. Makino shook her head sadly, while Yuki looked like she was going to cry. "Don't worry Ace this is Luffy your talking about he'll be ok. He always surprises us" Makino said with a smile and left the room with the cake. "He'll want this later, I'll put this in the fridge." Ace and Yuki stared at Luffy for a bit. 'I have a bad feeling' they thought in a union.
I'll end it for now. So was it good,bad, boring tell me! Plz review!