* My first poem about war; inspired by Star Wars and the Animorphs

* My first poem about war; inspired by Star Wars and the Animorphs. Please comment. This isn't exactly Animorphs, but about a girl, Alexan in a similar situation; daydreaming on a summer day about her life now *

A Midsummer Day's Dream

I lay here...

Lying awake,

Wondering what my life has become

Is War turning me hard?

Or is violence just giving me a hard time?

I wonder sometimes if,

If, I-the real I- am still alive

Am I losing my sanity?

Or has it already died with every other person I have killed?

In those days, keeping secrets were different...

Then, did I have the guts to tell someone that I liked Ewan McGregor?

But now,

Can I tell anyone that all humanity may be lost?

I now leave you one word for all races in all galxies and all of time...

This word, is powerful, although small...

Hope...

* So how is the poem? Please comment!*