All right everyone; let's celebrate, because I'm revising this story! So here we go!

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Peins hand came out from under the blankets and hit the 'off' button to the raging alarm clock. He then threw the covers off of his body and walked out of his shared bedroom. As he walked down the stairs, the sound of a breaking plate rang through the house.

"Hidan, be careful!"

Konan yelled from the kitchen downstairs. Pein entered the kitched to see Konan and the 8 homeless children they've fostered. He sighed as he walked over to his seat at the kitchen table as Konan looked at Pein, soon returning to disciplining Hidan, the trouble maker. Itachi was a raven haired ten year old who was stoic at times, but his childishness would show. Kisame was 11 years and his skin was quite bizarre, for it was blue. He was a respectful kid and usually listened unless he was in a really bad mood. Deidara was only 6 and had a strange obsession with explosions and fire for a young kid. Sasori was 12, older than Kisame, he had an obsession with puppets and science, but mostly puppets, and the freaky ones. Kakuzu was 10, the same age as Itachi and loved money and politics, an odd choice of interest for a boy his age. Hidan was 9 and was already swearing for he followed the little known religion of Jashin. Then there was Tobi, he was 10 and was way too hyper for Pein and Konans' likings. Zetsu was the most recent one they've fostered and he was just flat out strange, he had green hair, but that wasn't the strange thing, it was the fact that half of his body was black, like the color black, not the race, and the other half was white like paper, not the race.

"Today's Monday, am I correct?"

Konan asked as she checked the calendar with pictures of different flowers for each month. Deidara shrugged, taking a sip of his orange juice before setting the glass down to talk with Sasori.

"Why should I f*ckn' care?"

Hidan spat, leaning back in his seat in a laid back gesture.

"Hidan, you know better."

Kisame warned, shaking his head slightly.

"Well anyways, we've gotta find homes for you guys some how, we can't keep you forever you know."

Konan pointed out…again for the seventh time that week.

"I don't wanna leave you guys."

Deidara whined, tears welling up in his eyes.

"Don't worry Dei, you're going to be the last one to leave this place since we're supposed to have the older ones leave first."

Konan reassured as Sasori looked down, feeling dumped.

"It's okay Sasori, I'm sure you'll end up with someone nice."

Konan reassured again, this time to Sasori who didn't seem convinced. Konan really didn't want to leave the kids either, but their neighbor complained about it and forced them to get rid of five within three months and that was hard.

"So, who's the lucky three?"

Hidan asked as if taunting Kisame and Sasori since they had a slim chance of staying.

"Hidan, don't worry about it yet, there's still three months."

Konan said.

"Who said I was worried?"

Hidan questioned, crossing his arms.

"Konan did."

Kakuzu simply stated as he took a sip of his milk. Konan looked at the clock; it read 8:05.

"All right you guys, go get ready for school."

Konan announced as Deidara got up and ran off to his split room as Sasori followed.

"I'm gonna beat you there!"

Deidara happily chimed as the two raced to their rooms.

"Say, where's Tobi?"

Pein asked, looking around for the hyper boy.

"He's in the living room, watching television."

Konan replied as Pein started for the living room and saw Tobi sitting on the couch, happily watching his favorite show; Spongebob Squarepants. Once that show was on, it was near impossible to get Tobi away from it.

"Come on Tobi, time to get ready for school."

Pein announced to Tobi who didn't even look at him.

"No, Spongebob is on!"

Tobi protested, crossing his arms and refusing to get up.

"Come on Tobi."
Pein sighed; this was a daily thing he had to do whenever they had to go to school.

"Never!"

Tobi continued to protest as Konan walked in, seeing the problem Pein was having.

"Tobi, if you go to school, when you come home, I'll have a Spongebob DVD for you."

Konan said, perking Tobi up.

"YAY, SPONGEBOB DVD!"

Tobi cheered, racing up the steps to his room.

"You're spoiling him."

Pein said with a small smile.

"Yeah, but sometimes you just have to do it."

Konan sighed, turning the television off. Deidara came racing down the stairs with his favorite yellow and white backpack stuffed with who knows what.

"Okay Konan, I'm ready for school!"

Deidara announced as he plopped down on the couch next to Konan.

"Great, now all we need to do is wait for the others to get down here and we'll be off."

Konan said, patting Deidara on the head.

After Konan had dropped the 8 off at their bus stop, they said their good byes and she was off, back to their home. Once the bus pulled up and opened its doors, the 8 walked on and sat in rows one, two, three and four. They never spoke to each other on the bus or during school and nobody knew why, but nobody pestered with it anyways.

The bus finally arrived at their school and all of the kids on the bus filed out and walked into school, chatting and stuff as they all headed to their first class.

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Yay, cheers for me, the first chapter has been revised and I didn't even notice many changes except for a little more detail and a few incidents were cut out. So please enjoy the revised version of this chappie as the other chappies will be revised as well. Peace!