What Happened to this story you ask? A REVAMP.
I got some new inspiration, and after a "few" months of milling over the character details I'm going to restart from scratch.
So please. Get READY.

Really though, after a nice long critique from "Kitty Neko" I had to re-evaluate my story,

alot.

LIKe. Yeah.
So hopefully within the month, I will have the story up.

Aptly titled (i think)

"The Obnoxious and the Observant"