Hunter killer chapter one revised
so maybe all the reviews and people telling me that the orginal chapter one was crap so here we are with a different one.
"Spolier"Ok but this is needed,the story is mostly told from the point of view so the lucky star cast acting like we know them to wouldnt be noticed by him so I think Ive covered myself now!
And one more thing this is the first chapter re done so its alot differnet from the second and the third etc.
Japan:5:30
Location:Tall building.
I suppose Ive always been like this,Sometimes a killer,sometimes a thriller then again its what Im good at.I suppose why Im here is the question that Ive been asking myself.
But then again who cares?
Pulling my rifle out the backpack and setting it up on a ledge while in the cover of darkness is no easy feat but Ive done it before, I set the rifle up and calibrated the aiming sight so the bullets wont go off target.This is pretty easy.After a few mintues of intensive care of the rifle,I walked over to the edge of the building with absailing equipment in tow.Brrr its bloody cold.Making sure that I had a clear line,I fired the grappaling hook and the rope instantly sailed through the air and hit its target.A building below me=good escape route. My hands gripped the rope to make sure it was secure so it wouldnt split,allowing myself satisfaction in this kind of work is frowned upon but anyway who really does care?
Grinning I loaded a magazine in and cocked the rifle. Safteys off now to find the target.
(Beep beep beep)My phone started to vibrate as a message came up.Storms getting worse."Yeah asif Im going to quit now"I said to up at the sky I saw the clouds become grey and soon everything was pitch black. Pulling my night vision goggles on and surveying the landscape around me I noticed that it was starting to rain. I hate rain.Patches of wet slowly began to appear around me and the roof of the building suddenly became hard to walk on.Not that this fucking rain does anything,I mean come on its just rain?.
I shivered slightly before getting into the time I saw that it would be at least a 20min wait before I could pull the shot off.Waiting,waiting waiting,god I hate waiting...expect for explosions but you know that they will go off.
15Mins later.
"Enemy convoy coming into range...target is the rich middle eastern".The mic around my ears crackled.Good I thought I would be here all day.The convoy came into view about a mile away down the stream of traffic moved so slowly.Come you bastad hurry up and come to daddy.
Opening the cover to the scope I observed the ordered chaos of cars and trucks trying to get round each I was only after a single one.Hmm that black car looks like a prime target.Zooming in the target car I groaned as the windows were blacked out.This means this guy is either in it or not."Well might aswell"I grunted loading in the 12.7mm round in the chamber.Bolt action is always fun.
To my suprise the car suddenly swerved on the pavment and stopped,shortly followed by a host of other cars.Are these guys idoits its like they want to get shot...well fine by me Im getting paid for this shit.
The doors of the lead car opened and a few men (bodyguards)stepped out.Do you really think a attack is going to be so ovbious that your wearing sunglasses at 6 in the morning?.I observed the fools strut around,shout orders to each other and generally cause a slight irratition.
The bodyguards finally stopped thier "pre emtive attack" checks and the leader of the (idoits who wear sunglasses at 6 in the morning)jogged over to a black car and opened one of the doors.Easy peasy shotgun squeasy.Cocking the rifle I put my sights on the black suited man getting out the car.
My crosshairs were over his head and the bodyguard was still talking to him.Here goes a 12.7mm courtesy of me merry christmas.Pulling the trigger,the rifle spat out leathal death and the barrett roared.
The bullet spiralled towards the target...He didnt even hear the shot and the bodyguard didnt hear it either until he dropped to the floor with no head.
Mission complete now to get the fuck outta here.
7:30
On the way to school. The maze of people and the chaotic situation of traffic ment that my depature from the kill was smooth and fast.Dum shits never even realised.My own black clothes were replaced with a new school uniform that had never been tried on before.
The 50. in my back was folded up and covered with school books that had never been opened.
Hang on this is the first time that Ive gone to school...yipy I get to be placed with boys who havent even hit puberty yet...oh the joys.While I was lost in my thoughts,a guy pushed me and I got knocked into a girl.
Aint having that.Recovering like the pro I am,my fist instantly sailed through the air and the resulating collison forced him to fall on the ground with a broken nose.
Almost instantly I was being stared at by a number of people."Oi get moving!"I shouted and they did.At least these ones are wise enough.
My fist never felt pain,strangly enough it never broke or it didnt bother me in the slightest.I was pushed into someone wasnt I?.Looking around I couldnt find anyone,suddenly a little hand grabbed my arm and looking down a cute pink haired girl with glasses was trying to get up.
Wait why isnt she up yet?oh yeh she wears a THE FUCK DIDNT I BRING A CAMERA."Need help?"I asked in my most polite form of voice but still I sounded irritated.
The glasses wearing girl looked up at me and sneezed a little.Cute like a kitten...expect kittens are good bomb devices."Umm yes help would be most welcome"She replied weakly.Holy fuck this isnt formal love!.I pondered what to do.Well shes pretty but can I be bothered...wait those are big...BIG TITS!.I hauled her up instantly.
"Thank you very much"The girl said as I lifed her up with minimal effort.Well I suppose I can leave now,and not do anything that she will be able to remember me from."Hey what school do you go to?"The pink haired girl asked,and I strugeled to think of a answer that I could easily give.If I just tell her then maybe she will leave me alone."So why do you want to know?"I asked trying to shift the convosation along so I could maybe make a run for it.
She felt her hair and shrugged,"Come on...tell me"Alright calm down.So I told when I said it,her ears pricked up.Dont tell me SHE goes?."Hey I go to that school,maybe we could walk there?"She offered.Fuck no woman.
"Sorry Ive got things to do,maybe Ill see you later"I told her and made my way to school,out of sight of anyone that had seen what had happened.Right so I go to school,do my work and then screw the education derpartment,hopefully not make friends and then blow up sounds like "education".Sooner or later,I was going to run into a building that looked like so after a hour of searching I found it.Looks like a shithole,with AIDS.I have no idea what this place is like anyway.
8:30 TIME FOR SCHOOL,SOMEWHERE IN SCHOOL.Soo class 3-B,they really like to make the names exciting dont they?.How about class full of boring subjects that you will never listen to?.Thats a good name,might even work one day.I strolled along the corrider,past classrooms which I would never even want to go into.
Finding the door with the correct and boring name on it,I turned the door KNOB and entered.God they are all looking at wait at a minute,that seat next to the girl I met earlier is the only one avaible,FFS."Names Mastu,where do I sit?"I asked without hesistation."Right there next to Miyuki"The blonde teacher replied,and I tried to hide my annoyance at having to sit next to the girl.I think that if I play it quiet then I might get away with it.She was one of two people that didnt notice the fact that I was annoyed,she got off lightly,the boy who came up to me and raged about how big my backpack was paid the price.
"Hey its too big and isnt school standard so get a new one!"He almost shouted at me.Well Im annoyed so taste a bit of meat."Sit down"I grinned as my fist made contact with his face and he fell over.Well that was a great start to the school year wasnt it?.
So there is all there will ever be for Hunter Killer and if your reading it after you read Kagamis unlucky star or anything after that then this might sound familer,unfortantly since this is the only revised chapter that Ive ever done for Hunter Killer it wont fit in so my aplogies if its confusing.
Anyway just grin and bear it really.
Read on!.