(A/N) all right this is my first story I wrote of my own free will so no one better expect it to be some mericail story, no I'm just and average person who thought he came up with a good idea and instead of letting it waste away I thought to do something with my life. Wile I may not be as funny as everyone else or other things like that I'm going to try my best and hope it will be good I have a lot more to say but I'll wait till you read this part of the story first see you at the bottom.
It was a grim morning the sky was dark gray and it looked like it was about to start poring on a large village. Inside that village was a small 6 year old boy. He lived in a small run down apartment that looked like a hurricane was summoned inside of the little house. This day the young boy's birthday October 10th was the day the nine tailed fox demon was killed by the village hero the forth hokage. This day every year there was a festival to celebrate the nine tailed fox's death by the hands of the forth hokage. The forth hokage was the little boy's hero and idol he wanted to be just like him. This year he tried to go to the festival. When the small boy got to the festival the people there looked at him like he shouldn't be. Thoughts like 'what is he doing here!!' and 'I hope the poor kid leaves before someone starts something. The little boy didn't notice the way everyone was looking at him, he didn't notice most of the adults of the village creep up behind him with any blunt object they could find, he didn't notice these thing until one of those villagers taped him on his shoulder. That's when he turned around looked at them and their faces and became scared for his life. Then the little child ran, he ran as fast as his legs would go. It took a wile but he finally got away from the villagers. As he got tired he sat underneath a nearby tree soon he fell asleep. When he woke up he was not under the tree anymore he was being dragged by his shirt's collar by two men dressed in mostly black and wearing some masks that looked like white animal faces. When they stopped one of them put him up against another tree, the little boy looked around it looked like they were outside the village. Then the man who was the one who dragged him said that he and his buddy have orders to kill him, after he said that they pulled out one katana each. They slashed at the young child cutting him in various places wile he was whimpering and curled up into a fetal position. After about five hours into the beating two other figures approached the area they wore mostly plain robes with hoods one was dressed in red and black robes the other in robes that were two different shades of white. They kept walking at a slow pace slowly approaching the little boy and his two assailants. When they got there the child was a bloody lump but he was still breathing the two new people looked at the two masked fighters. The fighters didn't want any witnesses so they rushed the two at blinding speeds when they got across from them all four stood still for a second then the two masked fighters had similar cut wounds where their hearts were, cut wounds made by there own katanas. After two more seconds they dropped to the ground dead. The white robed figures bent down next to the little boy and his hands started to glow green and the cut wounds the 5 year old had were starting to fade away soon the boy was standing upright. Then he looked around and saw…nothing. Soon the small child was running around like a chicken with its head cut off shouting things like "what's going on I can't see" and "I can't be dead yet I still need to become hokage like the yodime". After about 5 minutes of running around the young boy ran into a tree knocking him out. Then the red and black clocked man said "naruto-sama you haven't changed one bit" you could almost see a smile in the darkness that covered his face.
(A/N) all right I'm going to say a few things about my story here before you lose interest. Like I said before I'm a new writer I never wrote anything except some crappy essays for school so my story won't be all that good starting out I'm sure about that, this is why I want reviews, I want reviews to say one of three things 1. I like/dislike this part about your story. 2. I think that if you did (insert own idea here) then your story would be better. Or 3. I like your story keep up the good work. Really I don't care what you say in your reviews unless your complaining about the story because you hate my idea and not the way I put it into my story. another big thing this in no super powered naruto fic this is I guess a semi powered up naruto fic, naruto won't kick ass and sleep, naruto will have to train, naruto WILL get his but kicked from time to time, but over all naruto will be stronger than most kids his age.