This is my first fan fic so be as brutal as you want. I need constructive criticism to build the rest of my story. This will definitely not be the only fan fic I right and I plan on stretching it as far as possible. (It depends on the amount of good reviews I get compared to the negative reviews and the amount of hits I get. Depending on that I could up date tomorrow or never finish this story and take it down and start over.) I will write a fan fic involving a harem in the near future (if not this one) but this will be a NarutoxOC for sure. I already have a name for the OC but its not of my own design. I'll be borrowing from a video game which I will credit when the name of the character is revealed. Now to the fan fic.

Naruto's Suffering: Bloodlust Awakened

"How exactly did this all get started again?" Asked a black haired teen with murky red and white lochs of hair.

"Simple kit, you asked for it." Answered the demon fighting at his back.

"Run this over me again any way how did I ask for it?" Asked the teen.

"Alright, alright this is how it started... Naruto," Answered the Nine tailed demon fox.

FLASHBACK

It was about seven p.m. and Naruto was walking home after a day of running from the villagers. It started to rain lightly and it quickly picked up. After a minute the rain suddenly became a full fledged storm thundering and pouring. Naruto is about six and being six has only one option. HIDE. He finds a place in an alley that wasn't occupied by some drunk villager.

"Hey kid what are you doing out here during a storm this vicious? Come here before you catch a cold." Came a warm feminine voice from a door he failed to notice. "Aren't your parents worried at all? Why are you out so late any way?"

"I... my parents... I...don't have parents." Whispered the blonde boy.

"Well that's to bad... for you." Suddenly the figure moved like lightning and had Naruto pinned.

"What are you doing to me? Stop let me go!" Screamed the blonde.

"You will bear the curse of a demon who has lived a vampiric life to the fullest. Enjoy my curse you little brat. HAH HA HA HA HA!!!" Yelled the female triumphantly. She then turned to a pile of ash and that was all that was left of the vampiress.

"She bit me... she bit me... she... bit... me..." Whispered the blonde as he fell unconscious. He woke at the prodding of a villager. He woke with a start and was surprised to see a villager from yesterdays mob looking at him with concern in his eyes. 'What the fuck's going on?' "Where am I, who are you, and why didn't you kill me?"

"What in the devil are you talking about son? The only kid that deserves to die is that demon brat at the orphanage. You are lucky not to be that little demon after what we have planned for him," Said the villager with a sadistic look in his eyes.

"What plan would that be?" Asked the boy using what little time he might have had to get preemptive on the villagers plan.

"Well, I don't think I should tell you but you'd find out sooner or latter so I'll tell ya any way. We plan to capture the demon nail him to a wall and have a contest to see who can beat him the hardest with any choice of weapon that won't immediately kill him."

"I see well I'm off to... uh... tell my parents the good news that the demon will be killed today." Stated Naruto with false enthusiasm.

"All right tell them if they want to help to be at his apartment at noon. Got it?"

"Sir yes sir," Naruto did a fake salute and ran off to find his "Parents" at the Hokage tower.

Author notes:

This is it so far I need reviews to construct the second chapter. Also I will make the chapters longer so no complaining. And if you think about it this is my first story I've ever written for pleasure and it will actually have a meaning to the general public as a means for entertainment. Any way I need reviews and I will Update depending on them.