So, baisically I reread what I had writen, and, it was BAD! So here's a better, I hope, version of Rosa in Tokyo. Yeah!
It was a peaceful July morning in Brewster, except for at the Hartz house.
"Happy Birthday Rosa!" cried Ann. Rosa was turning 14. She was 5'11" and hade curly brown hair. Ann was two years older and shorter by 8". She had long straigh brown hair.
"Whose will you open first?" Annie asked. Annie was 7 days younger than Rosa, 2" shorter, and had long black hair. Ann and Annie were Rosa's best friends. "Please open mine, open mine!"
"Alright." Rosa said as she opened the package. "Thank you so much! The Fruba anime seires. Thank you!"
"Here's mine." Ann said as she gave Rosa a small box.
Rosa opened it and found a small gold medalion. "Cool. What is it?"
"It's a wishing coin. It's suppost to grant 3 wishes." Ann replied, "I got you these too." She handed Rose 15 small plushies, one for each of the zodiac, plus Akito and Tohru. "The whole seires."
"Thank you both SO MUCH!" Rosa said giving them each a hug. "Now, who wants pancakes."
It was later that evening when the wishing coin was brought up again.
"What should I wish for?" Rosa asked her friends, "Money? Love? Fame? Real friends?"
"Hey!"
"I know!" Rose shouted, "I'll wish to be in Fruits Basket! That would be awsome! Comon, let's try."
They all sat in a circle around the coin and held hands.
"Um... I wish I was in Fruits Basket with my friends." Rosa wished.
"Is it working?" Annie asked.
"Nope." Ann replied, "Good thing I got the plushies."
Before anyone could drop their hands, though, the coin flashed white light.
Then, nothing. The girls were gone.
So, what do you think? Ok? Please review. Thanks.