Here's a little trailer thing i wrote to the Hannah Montana song if we were a movie. Please read it and tell me if you think it should be made into a story.
"If We Were A Movie"
Uh oh
Shows the front of a school with students hanging out on the front lawn, chatting
There you go again talking cinematic
Zoom in on a tight group of boys, chatting about something and laughing
Yeah you!
Zoom in on a certain shaggy-haired blonde, laughing with sparkles in his eyes
You're charming, got everybody star struck.
Zoom out, see girls side-glancing and giggling; see boys envy-watching the girls' side-glance
I know / How you always seem to go / For the obvious instead of me
See him wink over his shoulder at a certain flawless brunette
But get a ticket and you'll see
Watch said brunette flirting with said blonde, insulting LBR's, and gossiping with her bff's: a gorgeous Spanish girl and an athletic blonde girl
Chorus:
If we were a movie
Show narrator and her girl bff walking into a movie theatre
You'd be the right guy
Show hot guy actor on screen, pan to the 2 girls watching the movie, one is munching popcorn +m&ms, the other has gummy worms
And I'd be the best friend
Show the shaggy blonde and the narrator walking down the beach like best friends
You'd fall in love with
Show them turn to face each other, he tucks her red hair behind her ear
In the end we'd be laughing / Watching the sunset
Show the two laughing & watching the sunset
Fade to black / Show the names / Play that happy song
sunset fades, names of the two written in the stars. Guy is looking at stars, girl is looking at guy
(Yeah)
Yeah, yeah / When you call me / I can hear it in your voice
Narrator fumbles to answer cell, checks caller id, rolls eyes and answers.
Oh sure! / Wanna see me / And tell me all about her
Narrator nods, sighs, snaps phone shut
La la / I'll be acting through my tears / I guess you'll never know
Show narrator crying into her girl bff's shoulder, cut to guy being happy
That I should win / An Oscar for this scene I'm in
"And the award for best actress goes to…"
Chorus
same as last chorus
Wish I could tell you there's a twist / Some kind of hero in disguise
Show shaggy blonde boy breaking up with brunette girl, she storms away angrily
And we're together / It's for real / Now playing
He runs up to narrator, grabs her hand and looks her in the eye
Wish I could tell you there's a kiss
He leans in and kisses her
Like something more than in my mind / I see it / Could be amazing
Narrator looks way happy, but then we zoom out and she wakes up and realizes it was just a dream, sighs.
Chorus x3
So, what do you think? I know the plot has been recycled a bit through ff, but maybe not with these pairings. If you think it's story-worthy, please review. if you think it's not, review also. i'm not one to beg for reviews, but i'd like to know if i should continue with this.
Thanks!
xox