hi it`s my first fanfic please read it and tell me how was it

A day in the evening at Shiba house the doorbell rings and Ji went to open the door

"hello are you looking for Emily?" says Ji

A man's voice is heard and says "yes its Emily at home?"

"Emily someone searches you" Ji shouts

"Ok I'm coming Ji" said Emily

When she saw the boy at the door she was so exited

"I'm going out" Emily shout

"Ok" they said in unison except Jayden was limited only to look out the corner of his eye

After Jayden saw Emily go out he go to ask to something that probably he would not like the answer

"Who is he Ji?" Jayden asked feeling like his stomach was burning with jealousy he felt when he saw Emily with another guy

"Emily's friend," said Ji

"And what about the rules?" Says Jayden angry

"Emily knows the rules but she need to go out with other people "says Ji very calm "just calm down"

then jayden go to his room, he was sitting in his bed when someone knocks the door

"come in" jayden said

it was is good old friend Antonio who was worried about jayden

"are you ok?" antonio asked

"yes i am" jayden lie "why do you ask?"

"because i never see you actting like that" antonio said

"im ok i swear" jayden said with an angry voice

"are you jealous of emilys friend

hehe thats all for today plz tell me haw was it