italic he & she are a couple and normal ones are a couple [characters are listet below]
[it's also written from two different POVs - when you can say it like that]
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watching
He watched her. He knew he wouldn't/shouldn't/mustn't tell her that he had seen her before – had loved her before. That she was just a replacement.
He knew it, but it was too strong. His feelings for her were too strong. He knew that she didn't like her. Not even a tiny bit.
She thinks everything is her fault; that her parents didn't like her husband just because they had met him; that her parents didn't care for her son because her son is so much more adorable.
She shouldn't have a perfect life, because she is abnormal. She is a freak. Her parents shouldn't care about her.
But her parents did.
She saw the way he watched her, the way he longed for her.
And it killed her.
But then she got her wish.
She hadn't had the perfect life she thought she had. She was in danger. She had to fear for her life.
She wanted to apologize. At least she considered it. But it was too late.
They were dead – never coming back. The only thing they had left was their baby; a boy who should save the world in some years.
She watched her husband looking at him. She knew he hated this kid, created with a boy – a young man – she hated for a long time. But she also knew he loved her sister.
And he was the only thing left to remind of her. So both took care of him (she, because she wanted to lessen his pain [even if he didn't show it she knew he was pained], he, because he loved her).
They watched him growing up; watched him taking after his father. Only the boy's eyes reminded of his mother.
So they threatened him badly. She, because he took her baby's attention away, he, because the boy couldn't remind him of the woman he loved.
And so the story began.
Characters ... he = Vernon, she = Petunia, he = James, she = Lili
Yeah.. a friend described it as disgusting.. well, when you know the characters I guess it is.. xD
Is it worth a review?