Sorry about the frist chappy and the summary I am starting to write storys again and I writing them on my kindle fire so its difficult.
now I need help with stuff so if any of you want to be my beta reader please send a pm thank you now on with the story. I do not know naruto or any characters asides the ones I make up I do own the story line with the bloodlines and justus I imagined and wrote.
"Demon speaking/summon speaking"
"speaking/justu"
'demon thinking/summon thinking'
'thinking'
October 10th in the leaf village.
Today to most people in the leaf village it would be the death of Kyuubi with there favorite activitie the demon hunt. But to Naruto uzamakai it was the worst day of the year as he is always beaten and tortured nearly death. It was 6:00 in the morning Naruto just woke up and started eating his cup ramen.' why cant I have regular birthday like the kids without being hunted down and beaten.' ' why do the villagers hate me so much what did I do to deserve this.' This what Naruto thought and silently cryed as he eat his food. Once he was done he headed out the door trying to make sure the villagers could not find him. He ran to training ground 18 because it was far away from the village. When he got there he noticed it was pretty run down the tree were dead and huge craters were in the ground. Naruto said out loud. Naruto then just shrugged his shoulder and trained in taijustu.
9hours
Villagers start to surround the training grounds waiting to strike Naruto. One of the villagers breaks a twig which makes Naruto to get cautiones. "Whos there." Naruto askes with alittle fear. "KILL THE DEMON." A villager yelled and everyone starts the attack the blonde. Naruto tryed to escape but the villager surrounded him good as there were no open points. Then Naruto felt a sharp pain in his chest. He looks down and sees a knife is in his chest stabbing his left lung. Blood started to pour into his lungs making it so he can't breath. ' Is this how its going to end.' Naruto thought then he started to remember all of the people who were supportive to him. ' I cant let it end like this I cant let them down ' Naruto started to ignore the pain as he took the knife out of his chest. When it finally came out his wound of course started to heal. He looked at the villager who stabbed him and asked. "Why is it all of you hate me so much?" Naruto pleated to his attackers who were in shock at how he lived through the stab wound. One of the of the villagers then yelled "Because your the Kyuubi No Yoko the beast that attacked and killed the hokage along with our loved ones you are the demon who destroyed our lives!" Naruto was in shock was he the Kyuubi No Yoko no it had to be lie. Thats when a anbu dropped down and killed the claimer and grabbed Naruto and went to the hospital to drop off Naruto.
When they reached the hospital Naruto started to feel pain in his eyes. They burned like hell, cold as ice, seeing everything and everywhere, Awhile as feeling like your eyes are being crushed. Let just say Naruto was not having a good birthday.
Whats happening to Narutos eyes is it one of his bloodlines. Hows Naruto going to take the old fat fur ball of a fox. I know it was a short chapter but I plan on writing more storys and the resson I take forever is ether im super busy or im making huge chapter's now this has been Bmaster1 see ya next time on starting new or other storys byeeeeeeeeee
