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Hivemind
Xeno Hivemind
Queen Hivemind
Before the mission to the wave
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Hinata Hyuga lay face up on the roof of the Hyuga clan mansion, simply staring at the stars above her. She had just finished her personal training and now, she just rested. Hearing a noise, she gazed down at a Hyuga elder yelling at a child that had come to close to him. She snorted "the Hyuga are weak" she thought. "Relying on 3 tecnuiques to win them a battle, and such arrogence." Her mind turned to other things. "When I become then hyuga clan leader, who shall i marry?" Her mind projected several candidates Kiba? no, he was to brash and easily provoked. Shino? no, he was getting married to a diffrent woman, Naruto? Hell no, to really stupid. Sasuke? No, he's probably gay, anyone could tell that. Besides they were all to weak for her. " If I was just a bit older i could ki..." Her thoughts were interupted by the appearance of a fairly large shooting star. Activating her byakugan she stared at the star and suddenly it became clear to her. "Thats no rock"
In Mizo...
Gatoe laughed as another villager was exicuted for not paying the local "tax" on their lives. He had gotten richer because of it, and was going to continue to do it until they all died. A sudden, loud, crash awakened him from his thoughts. He rushed out side to see a piller of water crash back into the ocean. He walked back inside. It was probably nothing he rationalized to himself...
The water outside of Gatoe's compound...
As the smouldering mass of metal sank to beneath the waves two figures emerged from it and swam to the surface. One appeared to be a male human, the other figure was still underwater. Quietly, both of them beached themselves under a dock and rested a minute. The male turned to the other and he appeared to talk to it.
This is what they said
You ok Haze?
Im fine, but where are the others?
Either dead or in the water.
Damn, listen i'll find the others, you go find where we are.
Yes my queen.
Don't call me that.
The male sped off into the night at a high speed. The Xeno queen dived into the water and relayed a message to what was left of the hive.
To all surviving Druganov, this is your queen, Barca is scouting to see where we are, meet up near the forest on the coast, we shall plan ahead on what to do then.
With Barca
Sneaking through the roof tops of a a small degraded town, Barca looked for a good place to start a new hive. A cry of fear broke through the night and Barca watched in front of him as a female ran from a group of 9 thugs. As they cought up to her, they began to tear off her clothes. Her screams of protest fell on deff ears as they molested her body. Just as they were about to rape her, Barca walked up to them and greeted them.
"What do you want?" the man said, with a heavy slur in his voice.
"Food" he simpally said as he twisted the mans head off
The other men dropped the woman and, with a cry, attacked Barca. Dodging a punch, he grabed the mans arm, tore it off, and brained him with it. Another man attempted to stab him with a sword only to find his hand missing and a sword clearing the other side of his body, and in to a wall. A man grabbed him from behind, only to be shanked by a barbed tail that had came out of the bottom of the cloak he was wearing, and threw him at another man, whos neck was broken on inpact. He dodged a kick then tore asunder the mans leg. He then grabbed the man and threw him at the sword in the wall. He charged a man, and his tail stabbed the man crotch to top and threw him at the stumpy man. Grabbing the last man he looked him in the eye before tareing him in two. The last thing the man saw, was black eyes.Unforgiving black eyes.
As the berserkergang left him he walked over to the shivering woman and gentelly picked her up. He brought her to a door and knocked on it before running towards the corpses. Tearing the sword from the wall, he stabbed the peices of human that he had wrought all over the place on to it and picked it up. Grabbing the moaning man with his free hand, he began lugging the sword and the man towards the forest
When he got there he saw 7 Xenos and the queen lolling about. Dropping the human flesh and survivor he walked up to the gaggle of aliens.
Grid, Sleipnir,Nosy, Shadow,Ankylos,Shira, Chime glad to see we all made it.
BARCA!
A lump of Xeno flesh pounced on to Barca. and jumped repeatidly up and down on his stomach.
Did you miss me, did you miss me, huh?, did you miss me?did you miss me?
Yes OW Grid OW i missed OW you OW now OW get off OW NOW!
Pushing the extatic drone off him, he greeted the hulking black Preatorian in front of him.
Ahhhhh...Barca good to see your not dead.
Same here Nosy.
Don't call me that.
Whatever Nosy.
Barca laughed at the sulking royal guard in front of him. Haze had layed only 8 eggs for the rapists on the ship that had crashed. One was still in facehugger form. Over time he had begun to talk to each Xeno. They weren't just mindless killing machines, they each had a distinct personality and charectaristic
Grid was a nurse. Her body design was specifically made for transporting and carrying eggs and facehuggers. She was a normal looking Xeno with four spines sticking out of her back and a mid sized tail. Sleipnir was a runner. His body was made for scouting and swimming. He was red with no spines and walked on four limbs. Nosferatu or Nosy, was one of the three royal guards to the queen. He was built to keep the queen alive. About the size of a Toyota whilst croutching, with an extra exoskeleton on the outside, and a long tail. Shadowbane, or shadow, was the second of the three royal guards. He was white with the same charecteristics as Nosferatu . Ankylos Was a worker. He would dig the hive and build any thing related to one too. He had a large ball at the end of his tail.and really sharp claws. Shiranui or Shira, was a Hunter. He would catch the hosts, and the food for the hive. He had no spines. Chimera was a relitivly new addition to the Druganov clan. For one he was a Hybrid Predalien, and the reason that the ship crashed was because he had escaped and killed the enginearing team and the captain.
At once the collective noticed the bleeding meat that Barca had dragged with him. Nodding, Barca watched with a slight twinkle in his eye, as the 8 Xeno's dug in to the eight corpses. Walking over to the moaning man he punched him in the face hard enough to knock him out.
Hey Grid.
Yea Barca?
Is the Facehugger still alive?
Yep why?
Bring him over here.
But i'm eating, and it tastes sooooooooooo good.
Now.
The Alien Nurse walked over to the unconciencous man and began, to what seemed like choking for outsiders, to draw up the face hugger from a sack from the side of her
body. The hugger launched it self at the unconsciencous man. Then, all was still exept the other xenos.
After they were done eating, Haze began to relay orders.
Barca, Nosferatu, Shadowbane, and I shall stay here and guard the body, Chimera, Grid, Sleipnir, and Shiranui, you 4 go and build us a temporary hive, when the morning comes we shall relocate to the hive, no matter the size, im I clear?
Yes mother.
Yep.
Good now go.
As the Druganov bounded in to the night, Barca lay on the grass and yawned.
Tired are we? go ahead, I will wake you when we leave.
Nodding, Barca shut his eyes, rolled over and slept.
Haze stared at the sleeping form of the third of her Preatorians. Although a human, he had proved himself worthy of the royal jelly. She was glad to have him abord in the Druganov clan. Laying next to him, she too fell asleep, lost in her thoughts and dreams.
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Done... Here is a list of the current Aliens-Xenos-Xenomorphs-Druganov
Grid-Nurse-Drone
Sleipnir-Runner
Haze-Queen
Nosferatu-Royal guard-Preatorian
Shadowbane-Royal guard-Preatorian
Ankylos-Worker
Chimera-Predalien-Warrior
Shiranui-Hunter
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