So this was a random poem that just kind of popped up. I kept repeating the first two lines in my head when I though I could make a story out of them, but then, as I typed, I realized a poem would be better.

For those of you who read RUINED, I have a bit of writer's block...sorry.

The poem's meter is: A B C B (A doesn't rhyme, B does, C doesn't rhyme, B rhymes with first B)

Disclaimer: I only own the poem, not the characters. That's Disney and Square Enix.


Mascara trails down her cheeks.
Holes punched in my walls.
Broken diamond eyes
Stare as tears begin to fall.

Words fly, fast as light.
Screams reverberate all around
Although many doors slam,
Neither one of us make a sound.

Thunder roars against the sky.
Lighting illuminates the street.
She runs out into the rain
Numbness in her bare feet.

I don't give a chase.
I don't shed a tear.
For this was not fate,
This was my worst fear.

Namine runs,
Puddles soaking her feet.
Her dress was now messy,
Though once it was neat.

I forgot how it started.
I forgot what it was for.
But our useless argument
Made our love sore.

Madly in love,
We once were with eachother.
Images of us
As potential significant others.

But time grew stale.
Malicious feelings flared.
I realized too late
That we still both cared.

Finally I ran,
needing to reach the girl.
I was out the door when
I almost had to hurl.

There she was
face down on in the grass.
For some unknown reason
Everyone would pass.

When I reached her cold body
I saw she wasn't dead.
But still she had
Blood pooled near her head.

"Namine!" I cried,
Painfully loud.
As her eyes began to flutter
"I'll stay here" I vowed.

Small smiles.
Sad eyes.
Her blue hues glowed
Like ecstatic fireflies.

"What happened here?"
"I slipped and fell."
"You know I didn't mean it
When I said 'go to hell'"

She shook her head "yes"

I bent, lifting her into my arms.
She looked up at me,
Her eyes were starry charms.

Joyous tears trail down her cheek.
Breath cool on my face.
My head slowly moved down;
I just wanted a taste….

Our kiss didn't last.
It was small, like our fight.
Yet it made more of an impact;
It made everything right ~X~


Aside from a few stanza's that broke the flow, I think it's pretty good! Though I'd rather have your review!

So tell me what you think!!