Factions High School: When I Saw Him Last
Okay so this is my very first fanfic and I don't know how it will turn out. PRE-warning I am a country girl and am listening to Luke Bryan while I write this so if lyrics show up it is not my fault...any ways here it goes.
Oh and I hate these but I have to put them in so...
Disclaimer: I am obviously not Veronica Roth because I cannot write like her or be as amazing. Just normal Claire(that's not my real name but when I write that is the name that goes on my work).
Chapter 1
Beatrice Prior is now put in the custody of Andrew Prior. Natalie Prior has visitation rights to at least four days a month.
11 Months Later
No. The first thought in Beatrice's head was no.
Her parents had recently gotten a divorce and she was in the custody of her dad. She had a say in this and she chose her dad.
One Month Later
(August 3rd)
Beatrice's POV:
"Beatrice hurry up the truck is leaving in 30 minutes if you want your stuff in the new house before we get there on Tuesday." Andrew Prior said to his 16 year old daughter, "You have had a month to pack and you just started last night?"
"Yes, I needed all my stuff until last night." I said I knew I could have packed everything a month ago and not missed it but I didn't want to leave my mom and move all the way from Dillan, Montana to Dublin, Texas. (there is no place called Dillan, Montana just an FYI) That was over 1,200 miles away from my life and my friends!
When I went down stairs with my last box i found all of my friends, Chris, Mar, Shauna, Lynn, and Will. And you can't forget my "brothers" Uriah and Zeke they were family and helped me the most through my parents divorce a year ago.
"OhMiGosh! You guys are amazing I am going to miss you so much" I said "I wish I could stay with Chris or Mar or someone but my dad said he needs me in Texas."
Chris replied immediately with "You can hide in my closet?"
"Mine too." Mar said in joking voice because we all know she has the smallest closet of all of us.
"Well I would love to stay in your closets but I kinda just put all my stuff in a truck heading to Texas. It might be a new start plus nobody in Texas knows about Al or Robert" I said in a hopeful voice. It was my way of starting over. Al was my boyfriend then one day when I found out my parents were getting a divorce I dumped him and he went crazy. At first it was small things to get me back and then one day he got drunk and attacked me. I have been taking hand-to-hand combat classes since the 5th grade when I told my dad I wasn't a girly-girl when he bought me a dress. HE then asked me what I wanted to do and I said fight so now I am National Girls Champion and took second in a Sharp Shooting competition. So back to Al I kinda beat him up then three days later he committed suicide and his best friend Robert has been threatening me ever since.
"...hello anybody in there?" Zeke said while waving a hand in front of my face
"Oh, what were we talking about before I zoned out?" I asked
"Ummmmm well we were talking about that kid you liked in like 7th grade and he was knew then moved again. His dad was in the government along with your dad. And we talked about how you loved him and..."
"Uri shut the hell up before I make you." I said in a dead voice
Uriah's face fell and turn almost white as a sheet.
We then said our good byes and I got in my dads truck as we were going to be taking a three day trip there. Which meant driving 1200 miles about 17 hours. We were stopping in Denver to see one of my dads co-workers for a day first.
When we finally made it to Dublin I walked inside to find every thing where I had wanted it. I ran up the stairs to my bedroom and found the walls painted purple and black I then threw my suitcase by my closet and fell asleep on my bed.
When I woke I smelt bacon and pancakes but mainly bacon. I brushed out my hair put on some short jean shorts and a black tank top. Along with eye liner and mascara.
As I walked down the stairs some one knocked on the door I yelled to my dad that I would get it. When I open the door there stood an attractive guy no not just attractive but extremely HOT!
"Hi I'm Four I brought you a 'Welcome to the Neighborhood' basket from my dad and I." Four said
I then looked into his eyes and they were a dark blue that you could drown in.
"Oh, uhh, Hi I'm Beatrice but you can call me Tris and Thank you" I said then I did't want to be rude so I opened my big mouth "do you want to come in my dad is making breakfast and I'm sure there will be enough"
Gosh why do I have such a big mouth
"Sure." Four said as he walked in then I realized that I knew him from somewhere, wait those eyes could only belong to one person. Before we got to the kitchen I stopped him looked him dead in the eye and said
"T..."
Okay sorry a cliffhanger but I will try and write again today if I have time. I had no school so that is why i finally wrote this. I'm tired because I went to The Band Perry concert last night and was up all night so sorry for any mistakes and I'm going to ask for reviews just so I know how it is doing and all that
So see yallas later
~Claire