BACKGROUND
Hey guys! This is my first fanfiction story in a looong time, so reviews would certainly keep the chapters moving, hint hint lol...Make some suggestions for me, all that great stuff!
SUMMARY: When a sixteen-year-old girl is found dumped in the grassy pit next to her school, the detectives believe that it is the work of a family member, especially when they learn that she had been kicked out of her home six months before.
"Wait up Kate!" Seventeen-year-old Johnson Academy senior, Dani Pachillo, called to her friend Kate Snipes. They were on their way to their internship to Johnson Elementary/Academy, as a part of their child development II class. To get there, they had to cross a large dirt pit. The pit was a skateboarder's dream, and was also where students went to smoke or dip before emerging onto the busses.
"Aww look, Kate, a puppy!" Dani called, stopping at a bunch of shrubbery. There was very little of it on the field seperating the two schools, but this was a thick bunch. "Dani! We're already late, c'mon!" Kate said angrily, walking back to where Dani had stopped over.
Dani gingerly picked the little dog up, which had been licking at something in the bushes. Kate heard Dani scream.
They both peered into the shrubbery and saw a beaten up body.
"Body was discovered at 8:35 AM by Katherine Snipes and Daniella Pachillo, AKA Kate and Dani. They believe that she went to the school, and Dani thinks that her name is Kayla, or Kaylynn, or something like that," a police officer named Rich Harlowe reported to Special Victims Unit detectives Elliot Stabler and Olivia Benson.
"You know the cause of death yet?" Olivia asked the medical examiner, Melinda Warner. Warner led the pair to the body.
The girl had brown hair and was considerably pale. She was also very overweight. "Well I can't tell for sure, they won't let me move her yet, but there's a lot of bruising. Someone did a number on this girl, both the person who murdered her and it looks like there was previous bruising, as well."
Olivia and Elliot looked at eachother. "Or the person who killed her and the one who left the previous bruising are the same," Elliot said before turning and walking away.
I know, boring right? I hate first chapters!