Hey guys. Being as this is my first story I have a few requests. First of all, constructive criticism is appreciated, but please no flaming. On top of the fact that this is my first story, there is no need to flame a story in my opinion. If you don't like my story, either tell me what you think is wrong in your reviews, or just stop reading it. Also reviews are greatly appreciated. Just so you know at times I go a bit overboard in my descriptions. Also the storyline will most likely follow Erika and Verid, I have not yet decided if it will follow another character. Here we go.
Disclaimer: I most certainly don't own Fire Emblem
A blue clad soldier rushed through Renais Castle, stopping before the throne. "King Fado the garrison has been breached, emperor Vigarde's forces are within the castle walls!"
King Fado stoked his beard then asked, "What of my son?"
"We've lost contact with prince Ephraim and his men, we can expect no help from his forces," the soldier replied grimly.
"Then we have no other choice, order the men to lay down their arms immediately," Fado said with grim finality.
"F-Father you cant be serious,' princess Erika exclaimed!
Fado stared into his daughters pleading teal eyes, which matched her hair, and inquired "Erika, do you have your bracelet with you?"
When she nodded, Fado nodded and said, " good take care to keep it with you at all time," before turning to the cavalier and paladin near Erika and said, "Seth, Franz, take Erika and flee to Frelia. King Hayden is an honorable man, and I trust you will be safe with him."
"Yes, your majesty," Seth, the paladin said. With that he pulled Erika onto his horse and began to ride away.
"Father," Erika exclaimed, "You cant-," But she disappeared around the corner with Seth and Franz Before she could finish what she was saying.
"Erika, Ephraim, stay safe," Fado whispered as his few remaining guards were annihilated and the emperor of Grado, Vigarde, and his son, prince Lyon marched into the throne room.
Whew first chapter done. Yeah I know not very long or exciting but it'll get better. If I mess up some of the dialogue please forgive me, it'd been awhile since I played Sacred Stones. I'll start writing the next chapter in about three days, hopefully giving you guys time to review this story Thanks a bunch to whoever read this chapter. Please stick with the story.