Hello people this is my first story and would really appreciate if you let me know about things you would like me to write about, if you maybe want a new character involved, or change about my story.
Shout-out to Dnny99 for helping me out
The unexpected
Here we have john blitzzer but we'll call him John. John is a mma fighter/champion he's been fighting most of his life. When john was a kid he got into a lot of fights at school most of which where because he showed his emotions more and most boys don't like or do that. John had became so used to fighting that he decided to make a living out of it. John had been on the wrestling team for his high school and studied the Japanese fighting style goken(strong fist) it dealt with dealing damage and breaking bones with a strong offence and lighting speed. Johns 25 and lives in a relatively nice house and has a nice life. But that's all about to change.
John is in the locker room getting ready for his match. Has to fight a man named Dillon Christenson. He has been after Johns title since he beat him 6 years ago. John herd his named called and is making his way to the octagon. He took his time 'no need to rush right' he thought.
"welcome to the octagon folks today we have a special match for you. Standing in the left corner we have the champion John blitzzer. And in the right we have the challenger Dillon Christenson." the crowd is cheering in excitement. Mean while in equestria twilight has found a new book in her library that has a new transportation spell that teleports thing EXTREMELY long distances, like all the way across equestria. She was skeptic about it so she wanted to see if it even worked. Back to earth now.
John was fixing to end the fight when the round ended he went to his corner and thought about how he was soon going to be home soon and is going to watch my little pony friendship is magic. that's right John blitzzer the mma fighting champion is a brony not that would tell anyone. He got ready and went back in to finish the fight. The round started and john was going to pull out his secret weapon asa kujaku(morning peacock) it's a series of extremely fast punches dealt around the mid to lower torso. Dillon gabs John but John wants him to. John breaks form the hold and clears Dillon's arms out and *pop* John was about to execute his plans but stopped as he was about to hit someone that wasn't Dillon.
"Who are you?" john asked "I'm a god between dimensions." the god answered "I will award you. Your hear and that's a nearly impossible feat after all the wielder of the old ways died." john wondered "who are the 'wielder of the old ways'." the god didn't know why he didn't know of them they where from his dimension. They did die awhile ago. But It couldn't have been more than 5000 years. 'maybe they forgot'. "they called them selves shinobi. Silly name if you ask me. They used chakra and where always fighting. the one that visited me all those years ago name was named naruto I think our visit was brief, but he told me of his world and you guys came from the same dimension. I can tell because you have the same power signature. Its kinda light blue on the outside. But hey I'm rambling now here take this as a reward". the god put his hand on johns head. Then john felt a surge of power go through him. He felt invincible and gained knowledge he knew was from a very different world but still his( he has all naruto's power and knowledge). "now that that's out of the way I should let you go now I mean if someone where to use a high powered transportation spell you would be ripped from he and forced into that world. But that's highly unlikely". as if by irony he is in fact ripped from that world and forced in to the mlp fim world because someone used a stupidly over powered transportation spell. He looked up to see what happened but all he could see was a purple figure running towards him and herd something along the lines of "spike in need some help" but he couldn't be certain. And after that ha passed out.
Well how was it. If you want me to make it longer I will. I felt it was a little short myself. So please leave comments I really want to here your opinion.