I'm experimenting with !freeverse! Please, let me know what you think:)
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...Once upon a time...
You were Beautiful
Pure
Perfect
BLONDE hair
BLUE eyes
Loved
better than anyone else
[In your parents eyes]
Then s h e came
Loud
*B*r*i*g*h*t*
!J!o!y!f!u!l!l!
colours- all GREEN and RED
Like a DaNcInG FiRe
Or e-m-e-r-a-l-d-s
And your old life is |s|h|a|t|t|e|r|e|d|
\B/r\o/k\e/n\
...g...o...n...e...
replacedreplacedreplaced
By the (w(i(t(c(h
The s-p-e-c-i-a-l one
The m-a-g-i-c one
The one with I T all
And you're no longer
WILDFREELOVED
It's all h e r
You're fragile (pieces)
You're breaking (glass)
F_r_e_a_k
But is s h e the f r e a k?
Or is it you?
FreakFreakFreak
The scars ((inside))
That turn you bitter
T
W
I
S
T
E
D
and
T /
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R /
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Hide the hurt
D E
E D
E I
P S
I N
The _s_t_o_n_e_ that's your heart
Cover it up with harsh words
[Like poisonous arrows]
Protect your bitter
Bleeding heart
Crave s...o...l...i...t...u...d...e
To be - a - l - o - n - e -
Instead of hurt
Instead of replacedreplacedreplaced
With a new, :s:h:i:n:i:e:r: model
Forge your own way
Your own life
Your own family
...And once upon a time...
You had a beautiful son
Pure
Perfect
BLONDE hair
BLUE eyes
Loved
Better than anyone else
[In your eyes]
The h e came
Loud
*B*r*i*g*h*t*
!J!o!y!f!u!l!
colourful- all GREEN and BLACK
Like a bIlLoWiNg sHaDoW
Or e-m-e-r-a-l-d-s
Your old life is |s|h|a|t|t|e|r|e|d|
\B/r\o/k\e/n\
...g...o...n...e...
but not replacedreplacedreplaced
For your son will always be:
WILDFREELOVED
But still you wonder...
Was s h e the f r e a k?
Or is it you?
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