Inu-Hazel: Oh wow my first fan fic I am soooo happy ^^ to bad this has to
be edited for lemon and lime reasons.... Well this is kind of like a mix of
several anime shows.... but its in the Yu Yu Hakusho section b/c yu yu is
more popular than the others.... this story contains action, violence, and a
little romance for the non ed version it has the same but more uh.... lemon
issues.... *just a note to M.R.D* the part with Boton giving you a lap dance
is cut out...you can read it at school ....ok...
Disclaimer :I own none of these characters...except for me which this in I POV and. ...Well I think Skeith and Chief know who they are ^^...I am too poor to own Kurama and Hiei if I did own them they would be tied up in my closet.... I mean my sister's closet ^^;. Ok now for the story...sry no title yet...when I publish this around the world it will ^^.
It was March 23 in Tokyo, Japan. I was walking around town when I saw a cute boy. He was fair skinned; he had black hair with tips on the bangs. He had a white bandana covering his forehead. He looked like someone who didn't like to be bothered because he had on all black...so I walked right passed him. As soon as I walked in front of him he stopped me. "Is your name Erin?" He asked me. I looked at him strangely. "How do you know my name?" I asked. "Don't be difficult, just answer my question." He said. "First I want to know your name." "If I tell you my name will you answer my question?" I smiled and nodded. "My name is Hiei. Now will you answer my question?" He asked in a paranoid voice. "My name is indeed Erin...What do you want with me?" "Follow me." "Follow you where?" "Don't worry just follow." I just blew the hair out of my face and followed When we got to where he wanted to take me he filled me in on everything. "The reason why I brought you here was because it was under or..." Hiei said before he was interrupted. "There you guys are why did it take you three hours when it's a twenty minute walk?" The boy asked. The boy looked like a baby, he had on a blue and pink outfit and a hat. "Who's the baby?" I asked. "My name is Koenma, and I am 10 times older than to if u I am a day." "So your 140" "Lets not ask personal questions." "To answer your question from earlier, I would of gotten here sooner but she's not fast. And all the way she tried to take off my shirt." Hiei said. Just then another boy cut in. "Don't mind my sister she's a boy freak that she is." He said. I turned around and saw my brother for the first time in a decade. "Kurama! I missed you so much. I was so worried." I said. "Koenma why is my sister here?" "Well since Yusuke got up and moved, and since Erin has a high sprit awareness stronger than Shizuru's. I figure that she can be the new sprit detective." Koenma said. "No, no, no you are not putting my sister in the same kind of danger you put Yusuke in. I am not about to loss my little sister... and besides she's to young." "She's the same age that Yusuke first started, and now that we know what we are up against we will have an advantage." "But Genki is dead who will train here? "You two of course... you guys got Kuwabara stronger so you can get her stronger." "What?! No way I ain't training my sister. I don't even want her to do this." "Hiei will you train me to be as strong as my brother?" I said while pushing his bangs out off his eyes. "Hiei no, I don't want her in danger." Kurama said. "Don't listen to my brother he don't know noting. He thinks just because he's 25 and I'm 14 and we don't have any parents he can boss me around." "Erin shut up you don't know what you're talking about... And I don't boss you around so don't lie you spoil brat." I stuck my tongue out at him and looked at Koenma. "So what in the heck is a spits factor anyway? I asked. "Good question I would like to know also." Koenma said "Uh... I think she means sprit detective, she didn't quite..." Hiei said before Koenma interrupted him. "I know what she means...I knew it all along." "Sure you did" Kurama said. "Are you doubting me Kurama? "He he no sir you know I would never...." "Because Kurama you know what happens when you doubt me right?" "Yes!" "Are you yelling at me Suichi?" "Uh oh he said Suichi, your in for it Kurama." Hiei said. "Can we get back to me please?" I asked. "Yeah yeah sure sure as soon as I set this boy straight...Hey Kurama is that a strawberry sugar coated rice cake?" "Yeah...why?" "If you give it to me I'll forget this ever happened." "Ok." Koenma didn't realize that Kurama likes to lick the sugar off a throws the rice cake away. "Cool rice cake for me." Koenma swallowed the rice cake whole. We tried to hold the laughing in as long as we could but Kurama couldn't hold it in. Like I would say you only need one person to laugh before some one else starts laughing. The next thing I knew the 3 of us cracked up. "Whats so funny? I demand to know." "Kurama licked the sugar off the rice cake." Hiei and I said while laughing. "Why didn't you tell me sooner?" Koenma said. "Because you didn't let us you just gulped it down." I said trying to stop laughing. "Oh great now I am poisoned." "Come on its not that bad..." Kurama said. "Yea but where were you when Boton, Koenma and I was brushing our sparkly whites?" Hiei said smiling. "Did someone call me?" A girl with long blue hair and a pink kimono with blue flowers asked. "No Boton." Koenma said. "Um...hello people's can we talk about the parrot spectator now?" I asked. "Parrot spectator? What is that?" Boton asked. "A sprit detective is a detective who solves cases for the sprit world. 99% of them are very dangerous. Our last detective almost died several times...That's why Kurama don't want you to do this." Koenma said. "Sweet I'm in. This will be so cool. When do I start? I wanna get on it right away." I said. "That's the sprit. I'll keep an eye on cases for you." Koenma said. "Wait who's gonna train her?" Boton asked. "Nobody." Kurama said. "You mean she's already been trained?" Boton asked. "No...She ain't going to be a sprit detective." "Oh now Kurama have a heart let her do it." "No I ain't losing my little sister." "But another tournament is coming up and she can be the alternate." "Who else is fighting?" "Yusuke, Kuwabara, Hiei and you....We need one more person and Genki is dead so Erin has to do this." "Well Yukina lives by Yusuke, why cant she do it?....Hey did you say me?" "Yes, Kurama I said you and Yukina cant fight because she broke her arm and leg while doing a monkey cart wheel in gymnastics yesterday." "Well she shouldn't be doing anything all that difficult in the first place." "Don't be talking about Yukina like that...the floor was wet and we didn't know." "Feh, whatever look the bottom line is that Erin isn't doing this." "Is Yukina ok?" Hiei said "Yeah... Yusuke and Keiko is taking care of her...She's fine so far." Boton said "Please big brother pleases train me to be strong. I want to do this very badly." I pleaded. "Yes make her strong Kurama so she can kill us all." Hiei said "Who's gonna kill who?" I asked. "Fine I'll train you but if you die I ain't going to pity you...And besides being the only kid again is gonna be great...But I was an only child for 9 years...and...." "Oh shut up Kurama and train me." "Fine Hiei and I will meet you in the forest tomorrow." Kurama said as he went in the building...
Inu-Hazel: Well....how did you like the first part?....sry its so long...only 3 pages in Microsoft word...I have more written... but I don't have time to do it all right now...please read and review....better to mail me at Kuramalover4ever@aol.com....I don't know how to see my reviews yet....I'll have the 2nd part done sometime in April maybe before March 23 ^^.
Disclaimer :I own none of these characters...except for me which this in I POV and. ...Well I think Skeith and Chief know who they are ^^...I am too poor to own Kurama and Hiei if I did own them they would be tied up in my closet.... I mean my sister's closet ^^;. Ok now for the story...sry no title yet...when I publish this around the world it will ^^.
It was March 23 in Tokyo, Japan. I was walking around town when I saw a cute boy. He was fair skinned; he had black hair with tips on the bangs. He had a white bandana covering his forehead. He looked like someone who didn't like to be bothered because he had on all black...so I walked right passed him. As soon as I walked in front of him he stopped me. "Is your name Erin?" He asked me. I looked at him strangely. "How do you know my name?" I asked. "Don't be difficult, just answer my question." He said. "First I want to know your name." "If I tell you my name will you answer my question?" I smiled and nodded. "My name is Hiei. Now will you answer my question?" He asked in a paranoid voice. "My name is indeed Erin...What do you want with me?" "Follow me." "Follow you where?" "Don't worry just follow." I just blew the hair out of my face and followed When we got to where he wanted to take me he filled me in on everything. "The reason why I brought you here was because it was under or..." Hiei said before he was interrupted. "There you guys are why did it take you three hours when it's a twenty minute walk?" The boy asked. The boy looked like a baby, he had on a blue and pink outfit and a hat. "Who's the baby?" I asked. "My name is Koenma, and I am 10 times older than to if u I am a day." "So your 140" "Lets not ask personal questions." "To answer your question from earlier, I would of gotten here sooner but she's not fast. And all the way she tried to take off my shirt." Hiei said. Just then another boy cut in. "Don't mind my sister she's a boy freak that she is." He said. I turned around and saw my brother for the first time in a decade. "Kurama! I missed you so much. I was so worried." I said. "Koenma why is my sister here?" "Well since Yusuke got up and moved, and since Erin has a high sprit awareness stronger than Shizuru's. I figure that she can be the new sprit detective." Koenma said. "No, no, no you are not putting my sister in the same kind of danger you put Yusuke in. I am not about to loss my little sister... and besides she's to young." "She's the same age that Yusuke first started, and now that we know what we are up against we will have an advantage." "But Genki is dead who will train here? "You two of course... you guys got Kuwabara stronger so you can get her stronger." "What?! No way I ain't training my sister. I don't even want her to do this." "Hiei will you train me to be as strong as my brother?" I said while pushing his bangs out off his eyes. "Hiei no, I don't want her in danger." Kurama said. "Don't listen to my brother he don't know noting. He thinks just because he's 25 and I'm 14 and we don't have any parents he can boss me around." "Erin shut up you don't know what you're talking about... And I don't boss you around so don't lie you spoil brat." I stuck my tongue out at him and looked at Koenma. "So what in the heck is a spits factor anyway? I asked. "Good question I would like to know also." Koenma said "Uh... I think she means sprit detective, she didn't quite..." Hiei said before Koenma interrupted him. "I know what she means...I knew it all along." "Sure you did" Kurama said. "Are you doubting me Kurama? "He he no sir you know I would never...." "Because Kurama you know what happens when you doubt me right?" "Yes!" "Are you yelling at me Suichi?" "Uh oh he said Suichi, your in for it Kurama." Hiei said. "Can we get back to me please?" I asked. "Yeah yeah sure sure as soon as I set this boy straight...Hey Kurama is that a strawberry sugar coated rice cake?" "Yeah...why?" "If you give it to me I'll forget this ever happened." "Ok." Koenma didn't realize that Kurama likes to lick the sugar off a throws the rice cake away. "Cool rice cake for me." Koenma swallowed the rice cake whole. We tried to hold the laughing in as long as we could but Kurama couldn't hold it in. Like I would say you only need one person to laugh before some one else starts laughing. The next thing I knew the 3 of us cracked up. "Whats so funny? I demand to know." "Kurama licked the sugar off the rice cake." Hiei and I said while laughing. "Why didn't you tell me sooner?" Koenma said. "Because you didn't let us you just gulped it down." I said trying to stop laughing. "Oh great now I am poisoned." "Come on its not that bad..." Kurama said. "Yea but where were you when Boton, Koenma and I was brushing our sparkly whites?" Hiei said smiling. "Did someone call me?" A girl with long blue hair and a pink kimono with blue flowers asked. "No Boton." Koenma said. "Um...hello people's can we talk about the parrot spectator now?" I asked. "Parrot spectator? What is that?" Boton asked. "A sprit detective is a detective who solves cases for the sprit world. 99% of them are very dangerous. Our last detective almost died several times...That's why Kurama don't want you to do this." Koenma said. "Sweet I'm in. This will be so cool. When do I start? I wanna get on it right away." I said. "That's the sprit. I'll keep an eye on cases for you." Koenma said. "Wait who's gonna train her?" Boton asked. "Nobody." Kurama said. "You mean she's already been trained?" Boton asked. "No...She ain't going to be a sprit detective." "Oh now Kurama have a heart let her do it." "No I ain't losing my little sister." "But another tournament is coming up and she can be the alternate." "Who else is fighting?" "Yusuke, Kuwabara, Hiei and you....We need one more person and Genki is dead so Erin has to do this." "Well Yukina lives by Yusuke, why cant she do it?....Hey did you say me?" "Yes, Kurama I said you and Yukina cant fight because she broke her arm and leg while doing a monkey cart wheel in gymnastics yesterday." "Well she shouldn't be doing anything all that difficult in the first place." "Don't be talking about Yukina like that...the floor was wet and we didn't know." "Feh, whatever look the bottom line is that Erin isn't doing this." "Is Yukina ok?" Hiei said "Yeah... Yusuke and Keiko is taking care of her...She's fine so far." Boton said "Please big brother pleases train me to be strong. I want to do this very badly." I pleaded. "Yes make her strong Kurama so she can kill us all." Hiei said "Who's gonna kill who?" I asked. "Fine I'll train you but if you die I ain't going to pity you...And besides being the only kid again is gonna be great...But I was an only child for 9 years...and...." "Oh shut up Kurama and train me." "Fine Hiei and I will meet you in the forest tomorrow." Kurama said as he went in the building...
Inu-Hazel: Well....how did you like the first part?....sry its so long...only 3 pages in Microsoft word...I have more written... but I don't have time to do it all right now...please read and review....better to mail me at Kuramalover4ever@aol.com....I don't know how to see my reviews yet....I'll have the 2nd part done sometime in April maybe before March 23 ^^.