Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar
Really, I apologize for these stories being so bad. But, for the sake of "accuracy", I will put down word-for-word (excluding spelling errors) the exact dictation used in the originals. What you are about to read is the most vile and unsatisfactory creation compilation known to the human species.
Please keep your bile and vomit as settled as possible in your digestive system as we begin the horrors of childhood fanfiction.
Written in the year 2006 at the age of 11:
{oh gosh, my eyes! The horror! THE HORROR!}
Zuko: Wow, I've got to show you something.
Aang: What is- whoa. Katara, you got to see this. You too Sokka.
{AHH! the horrible dialogue! Hide yo' faces!}
Sokka: Man, what is it?
Zuko: It was the place where I was born.
Katara: You mean you are not born at the Fire Nation?
{please... anything but the madness that is about to ensue!}
Zuko's eyes start to glow a bright gold glow. Then, it stopped and an opening appeared.
Zuko: Let me show you what is in it.
Aang: That's amazing. Why is it separated in different groups.
Zuko: Good question. Air. Water. Earth. Fire. Spirit. Do not go into the spirit room until tomorrow
Aang: Why is that?
Zuko: I can't answer that question
Katara: Let's go to water.
A big tower had all the names and what is happening to the person behind the name.
Sokka: Look there's mine.
He pushed the rock. He fainted and the rest went inside. {Really? You aren't going to react that he freaking fainted?!} When they're finished they went out and Sokka woke up. {I wonder what really happened in there?}
Zuko: Time to go to bed.
Aang: Yeah.
Katara: Fine.
Tomorrow came.
Zuko: Time to go inside the Spirit group :(
{Really, there was a frowny face emoticon in the original. Yet, it wasn't an emoticon. It was written upright. Back in the days where text-talk wasn't really a real thing yet.}
Inside: Zuko went to the center and his eyes started to glow again. He started to float and everything was peaceful. Aang's eyes started to glow and Zuko fell to the ground. "Thud". {Really? Onomatopoeia out of nowhere?}
Zuko: I've never mentioned it, but, without me, there wouldn't be any harmony on the other 3 nations.
Aang: Please tell me why we came here.
Zuko: Ever since my 10th birthday, I had to go to this place to bring harmony. Ever since I heard of the war, I tried to stop it.
Katara: (eyes wide open) that's why you try to get away from the firenation.
Zuko: Not only that, I need the Avatar's help to make it stronger, but in a few seconds, something always happens to one of us. {NO! Stop with the cheesy madness!}
Zuko started to lift from the ground and was unconscious when he came down.
Aang and the rest of the gang said, "At least there won't be a war anymore. {Ugh! The horrible punctuation!}
Katara started to cry and left the area.
to be continued...
Thank God that was over. But... there's still a horrible continuation of this story. I guess I'll just leave right now to wash my hands and eyes from handling and transcribing this abomination.