The Revenge

by maxieface4

Toby and his Friend Shane, Team up to get revenge for murder of Toby's Girlfriend Sarah. Very dark story and will feature moderate language, a few swear words. the question is, would you risk it all for a chance at revenge? If you would, then take a look at this story.

1. Prologue

The Revenge

Prologue:

One night, sometime during May 2011, Toby was having a midnight stroll with his girlfriend Sarah, they normally took walks together at least once a week, sometimes more if they needed to offload to each other.

But this night was different, Toby had asked to meet her which for a strange reason made her a bit worried, he was never this spontaneous, if he wanted to meet up with her he would normally ask about a week before.

Suddenly Toby starts to speak breaking Sarah out of her thoughts.

Toby: So you're probably wondering why I wanted to meet up with you, right out of the blue.

Sarah: yeah the thought was crossing my mind, you would normally arrange it a week in advance, is something wrong?

Toby: No Nothings wrong, we've been going out for over a year and I have been meaning to ask you this for a while.

Sarah: is this going where I think it is.

Toby gets onto one knee and pulls out a ring.

Toby: Sarah, will you do me the honour of becoming my wife?

Before Sarah can answer, a loud sound is heard in the distance, suddenly a bullet is flying out of nowhere.

The bullet hits Sarah straight in the chest, she falls to the ground.

Toby: Sarah! No!

Sarah: Toby, I'm not going to make it.

Toby: No, don't say that, I'm phoning for an ambulance.

Sarah: Don't Forget me.

A/N: Sorry about the ending, but this is my very own story, while I originally wanted to be a video game but really loved the story and wanted to make a series out of it, and I recently found out I could upload it on here, so please review and tell me what you think of it.