This is my first story so be nice but please review!

Xoxoxoxoxoxo

Hi, my name is Renesmee Carly Cullen and i'm half vampire. My mom's name is Bella and my dad is Edward. This sounds really weird, but they're vampries! I was born a few years ago but because I'm half vampire I look and act like I'm about 16 or 17. I have long copper colored hair that grows in ringlets and my eyes look just like my mom's did (before she turned into a vampire), so their chocolate brown. My boy friend Jake says their beautiful.

Jacob Black is my boy friend. He's the best thing that ever happened to me. I've known him ever since I can remember. He's gorgeous and built and he has a six pack abs and black hair, russett skin and brown eyes. He's from an Indian tribe that's from around here and lives on a reservation.

I live in a town called Forks, but we never see the people who live there. We can't let them know we're vampires. But I still go to the Forks highschool. Today is my first day of school. I woke up at six and combed my gorgeous hair and looked in the mirror. I knew a lot of boys would think I was beatiful but I knew that i only loved Jake.

To get ready for school I put a bumpit in my curly hair so it would poof up in the back and I was wearing a black miniskirt (NOT TOO SHORT THOUGH) with striped socks on under it and black converse. I put a bow in my hair and some colorful extensions and then I put a red shirt with black writing in Latin on it... i knew what it said. My shirt wasn't too low cut though, i mean I didn't wnat all the guys staring at me. Jacob was the only one i wanted to notice me. But then again, even if it was low cut they probably wouldn't stare. i'm only a C cup after all. My boobs aren't very big and I'm really self-conscious about them... Jake says their perfect but he's just trying too be nice.

"RENEEEEEEESMEEEEE!" called my uncle Emmet, "Bella oops I mean your mom wants you to hurry up so you aren't late for your first day!" "God, Emmet," i said, "I'm coming!" I loved emmet but sometimes he's kinda annoying

I went down the long staircase and there w as my dad Edward on the piano. He played for my mom all the time. The melody was beautiful, it flowed so well it was like a river of sound and was not only as beautiful as the mountains we could see from our house and the sea but also reflected the love he felt for my mom…. The love they shared was so deep and special that it couldn't help remind me of Jacob. Remembering Jacob, I checked my cellphone for my good morning text. "I luv u", it said. I smiled and sent him back "ilu2". Jake is the best bf a girl could ever wish for…. I was so sad that he wasn't going to my school, but I never let it show on my face. Dad wanted me to experience high school and wouldn't let me homeschool, even though i'm smarter than the other kids. I don't think he likes Jake very much. As soon as school was out I woudl take my car (a red convertible) down to the reservation so we could spend a couple hours together, but now it was breakfast time.

I sat down at the table and punched my straw into a pack of blood Grandpa Carslile got from the hopsital for me. It was my favorite... AB positive... yum. "Renesmee, do you think you'll have a good day at school?" my mom asked. "it'll be great mom," i told her, even though it wouldn't be. I just wanted her to be happy.

"The alignment of mars and jupitor might means something," my aunt Alice said, drifting into the room.

Suddenly her husband/boyfriend/thing walked in looking kinda mad. "I hate black people!" he said, all angry. Then he left. Jasper is from the south.

"Jasper, stop being so ignant," I said. After finishing my blood bag i left the house. Mom thought taking the bus would help me socialize (and it wasn't legal for me to drive yet, even though i did it all the time anyways, i was better than most adult drivers) so I went to the end of the street. the ugly yellow bus was already there and i got on, wishing Jacob was with e.

Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

... a mysterious cloaked figure watched Renesmee Cullen get on the bus from behind some bushes. "Perfect... she would be perfect for my evil plans," he guy mumbled. He cackled before vanishing.

Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Review!