Thank you to my betta Solomonssavior for all the help. And it's awesome writing with you again. Your jokes and some of your general reactions are funny.
Snobby dickers (- NOW that is a description of a jerk! Beautiful!
Gotta be all present or all past tense. Pick how tense you are
-A better year's beginning… Not-
It was august 19th which was the first day of the new school year. A certain Naruto Uzumaki was getting ready for what would be the first day of his last year in high school, and good riddance as far as Naruto was concerned. The last two years had been hell for Naruto. Especially since the only reason he was there in the first place was because his godfather, who was loaded paid, his tuition. Plus, it got worse after a certain secret of Naruto's got out.
With Naruto being the "quote unquote" charity case, which made him lower than dirt, it was really hard for Naruto to make friends. But there were some people who weren't snobby dickers. A boy named Kiba, his girlfriend Hinata, and a girl named Sakura were his best friends, so they did just about everything together. It was hilarious how they all met but that's a story in itself; who knew penguins ate ramen."
Naruto's cousin and roommate Kakashi… was probably one of the coolest people you'll ever meet. Except for the fact that he read a lot of manga with weird covers that he wouldn't let Naruto see. Kakashi worked for Naruto's god father Jiraiya as manager at one of his book stores, ever since Jiraiya got success and opened his publishing company.
Naruto's god mother Tsunade who was the proud owner of a huge casino, and her assistant Shizune were nice to a point, Tsunade, with a bit of a temper and Shizune just little too formal, but Naruto still thought they were nice "Well, Tsunade tried to be nice anyways". She just wasn't good with teenagers because some people just aren't.
He needed every friend he could get because when everyone found out Naruto was gay there was nasty fallout. That was when Naruto started getting teased and bullied constantly. Unfortunately, most of his friends got caught in the crossfire trying to defend him especially Sakura.
Poor Sakura got the worst of it. She was always such a "put together" student as the teachers would say. This guy Sakura turned down because he was one of the ones bullying Naruto because she was friends with Naruto then started a rumor…" that she was a slut. And since it was high school, everyone believed it so now she was constantly getting groped and otherwise harassed. Sakura eventually had to be pulled out of school.
Kiba got detention multiple times and eventually expelled for getting into fights defending Naruto. Thankfully his and Hinata's families understood so he wasn't in trouble and was still allowed to date Hinata.
Hinata was pulled out of school right when Sakura was getting harassed so she was spared from the BS that was happening.
The rest of Naruto's class who didn't mind either way, just kind of stayed out of it. None of them saw anything wrong with that.
Naruto was actually planning to tough it out. He refused to be chased off by a bunch of assholes. However Jiraiya put his foot down and pulled Naruto out of school. Jiraiya then took it a step further. Jeriah got the Haruno's, Inuzuka's and, the Huuga clan to file a joint lawsuit with on behalf of the teens for the bullying that was left severely unchecked. Hinata may not have been bullied like the others, but it still scared her and made her feel unsafe.
Not surprisingly, lawsuit from two very wealthy clans and Jiraiya who was just as loaded; not to mention the fact that the Haruno's, who may not have been rich were nonetheless a highly respected family almost bankrupted the academy.
The only thing that saved its reputation was the fact the superintendent, who didn't know what was going on, because the school was so good at covering their assed temporally closed the school to clean house when he found out. This meant firing the staff and faculty. And I mean all of them. They knew and no one told him, or at least took action to nip it in the bud. To really bring the message home, he even expelled half the student body; only the half responsible for the bullying mind you. The ones who just let it happen but didn't participate were very severely reprimanded. Yes that also means Naruto's other class mates got chewed out "and all because they didn't report it". Things eventually quieted down after the lawsuit and schools house cleaning, so to speak, but unfortunately not for long.
========================Authors Note================================
Thank you Ennu for you very blunt but tactful review of my previous version of this fanfiction witch was
(Hun... This was not written well. There were lots of mistakes etc. The Idea was still good. I hope you will write this again, and add more thoughts, and tell it slower. That would be nice! Your writing is little careless, so please read it again and post it when you have done that. And capitalize the names. I hope you don't get angry; I just want to help you :)
I'm not angry and I worked really hard to rewrite it using the tips you gave me this is the result. Please don't mind the tiny bit of proofreading I did of your review it was still very help full and I appreciated the tips. I wanted to send you a thank you note but your messaging wasn't enabled so I put it here.
And thank you to everyone else who sent me tactful critiques for my other fics it really helped me improve my writing.
