This story needed to be re-written...badly. So that's what Im going to do. For now it's going to be a separate story until I finish it, then the old one is going.
Naruto doesn't belong to me.
"Why are we here again?" Hidan asked in a tired, annoyed voice. He trailed behind the rest of the group, which only consisted of Deidara, Sasori and himself.
"You know why we're here." Sasori answered irritably, rolling his eyes.
"No I don't asshole. Care to explain?" Hidan's boredom fueled his desire to annoy the two.
"Were just looking around. Hmm..." Deidara said, he went to the wooden door ad put his hand against it to find it damp and cold from recent rains. Not to Deidara's surprise, the door fell flat, coming off it's hinges with a loud creak.
The smell hit all three of them seconds later. It was a smell that didn't bother Sasori or Hidan as much as it did Deidara, who covered his mouth and tried not to gag.
It was the smell of rotting bodies.
"Holy shit, what the fuck happened here?" Hidan said, a little surprised by the strong stench.
Deidara examined the room, covering his nose and mouth out of all the bodies one caught his eye. It was a woman, she was huddled in the corner and seemed to be holding something, even if she was long gone.
Deidara cautiously walked towards the body, almost as if he was afraid it might jump at him. "Deidara! What the fuck are you doing? Come on, it smells like shit in here!" Hidan called, heading for the door.
Deidara frowned as he got closer to the body, seeing the small bundle in her arms.
A baby...
"I think I found something, hmm..." He said.
Sasori looked back to see Deidara pulling the bloodstained bundle out of the woman's arms, he to saw the round face of a baby.
Hidan stared in shock. "Is that thing alive?" He asked aloud in disbelief. Deidara watched the small baby shift open it's eyes. "Holy shit it is." Hidan said slowly.
"Hyuga..." Sasori said quietly, breaking his silence.
Indeed, it's eyes were a lilac-gray. "You're not planning on taking that thing home, are you?" Hidan asked cautiously, looking at it as if it was some sort of strange animal they planned to take home and keep as a pet.
"We can't just...leave it here, hm." Deidara said.
"We could raise it...to be one of us." Sasori suggested.
"Us? Raising that?" Hidan said, amused. "Hahahaha! No way in hell!"
Deidara scowled, then pushed past him. "I'm taking it back."
Hidan's face snapped from amusement to shock immediately. "What?"
Sasori followed, silent. It would be leaders choice anyways...
He was amazed as he watched Deidara carry the baby. He held the baby close to him, he acted as if it was his own child. It never occurred to him, he might feel sorry for the child.
As soon as Hidan stepped in the house he called. "Deidara found something pretty interesting!"
Kisame turned, looking at the bundle in Deidara's arms a grin spreading across his face. "I can't believe you brought that home."
Deidara noticed Tobi peeking around the corner and braced himself.
"A baby!" Tobi yelled, he ran to him. The others gathered to see the baby. Deidara explained what they saw, and where he'd found the child. Pein watched the baby, listening to their story.
"It is another member, if we raise it." Konan said, trying to persuade him, she to felt sorry for the child.
"But how are we supposed to raise it?" Itachi asked calmly.
"We don't." Hidan said flatly from his seat a ways off from the group. As you could guess, he was completely against keeping the child.
Deidara shot him a glare. "Is it a girl or a boy?" Pein asked.
"...Girl." He cringed as he said this. Being a girl hurt her chances, a lot. Hidan watched Pein, he could see the disapproval on his face. He looked over to see the girls eyes closed. He spoke up, saying something Deidara was forgetting. "She's a Hyuga." He surprised even himself by trying to help the child stay.
This seemed to catch Pein's attention. "Hyuga..." He said slowly, almost as if tasting the word.
"Think of how valuable having a Hyuga in the Akatsuki could be." Konan said, trying to persuade him still.
After a long silence, he nodded. "She's your responsibility Deidara, even when it comes to training."
A smile spread across both Deidara and Konan's face. "What's her name?" Tobi asked.
"Oh..." Deidara had forgotten completely about naming the child. His mind went blank.
"How about Akane? That's pretty." Konan suggested.
Deidara shook his head. "No...it's not quite right."
That's when the name hit him. He couldn't explain how he even came up with the name.
"Kori."
"Kori?" Both Tobi and Konan repeated, puzzled.
Deidara knew the logic behind the name...A Hyuga's color was white. 'Ice' The meaning of the name Kori...was white...not only that, it was Cold, and Harsh. Matching the personality she needed to become a member of the Akatsuki.
"It just popped into my head...I like it." Deidara said.
"So..." Tobi begain. "Kori it is."
So is it better?
I've fixed some things so it make more sense...I hope. Lol
Review and tell me what you think, thanks for reading^^
~Kuro-Kan and Shika
