Love So Right

Based on the song "Love So Right" by the Bee Gees, with a little twist of mine at the end.

Takato opened the door in his house, (home alone) and Rika was standing there.
"Rika…" Takato started.
"Takato…" Rika replied. "I love you…"
"Oh Rika!" Takato exclaimed happily, wrapping his arms around her.
They closed the distance and kissed passionately.
Rika shut the door behind her, still kissing him.

She came on like the night and she held on tight…

Rika pulled Takato onto his bed and started pulling his shirt off, with Takato doing the same to her shirt.
After both shirts were disposed of, Rika bit into Takato's neck, at the same time undoing his pants.
"Ah!" Takato moaned. "Rika…!"
Rika smiled, and removed the rest of her clothes.
They kissed under the sheets, and the heat between them increased…

And the world was right when she made love to me…
We were free…

"Rika!" Takato started. "I love you too!"
"Takato…" Rika said, eyes shining. "Please…"

She moved in like a friend, started loving me…
And I thought I found heaven in her arms…

"Oh!" Rika gasped.

Takato woke up in the early morning, smiling. She looked to his right, but Rika was gone.
He gasped. "Rika? Rika? Rika!"

But the morning when I woke up, I was here and she was gone.
Now I'm hanging on
Maybe you can tell me…

Takato looked, her clothes were gone.
"No…" He started. "She left…"

How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling.
How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong.

"Why did she leave?" Takato said, eyes watering. "Did I do something wrong?"

Where did she go when I need her close to me
And the perfect story ended at the start.

"She used me?" He wondered, a tear falling from his face. "Why..?"

I thought you came forever and you came to break my heart.
Now I'm hanging on, on the chance that you'll come back to me!

Takato buried his face in his hands. "Why Rika…Why!"

How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling
How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling!

For the first time in a while, he cried. He slowly redressed himself, and sat on the bed, still weeping.

"Rika…" Takato started. "I thought you loved me…But you used me instead."

I could take it in my stride
Start living for the moment
Maybe half the things we sought were never there.

"She never loved me…" Takato said bitterly. "Never, just wanted to have fun, then dump me somewhere. Great, you did it! Happy!"

Simply open up our eyes and break it down to size.
It isn't really fair…

How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling
How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling
How a love so right can turn out to be so wrong, oh my darling…

Suddenly, he heard the door open. Still crying, he looked up, and saw Rika.
He gasped, tearfully. "R-Rika!"
"Takato…?" Rika asked softly. "Were you crying?"
"WHERE DID YOU GO!" Takato yelled out. "Why did you just leave!"
"I never left you." Rika said. "I left a no—"
She suddenly slapped her forehead.
"Oh my God…I'm so sorry Takato!" She exclaimed. She reached into her pocket, and took out a note folded up. She handed it to him.

Takato took it and read:

Takato,

I love you to the ends of the earth. If you wake up and I'm not here, please don't fret. I went out to get a pregnancy test. We had no protection. I'm sorry to leave so suddenly, but I had to find out quickly, and if it was positive, we'd be in a lot of trouble. I love you Takato, forever and ever.

-Rika.

He looked up, eyes shining.
"Rika…" he started.

Tears started to run down her face. "I love you Takato. And I got the results."
"So quickly!" Takato gasped.
She nodded. "Here." She took a small object out of her pocket and handed it to him.
He gulped and read it:

NEGATIVE

Tears of joy flowed down his cheeks.
"Oh God Rika!" Takato jumped off his bed and embraced Rika.
"Takato…" Rika started.

But Takato cut her off with a kiss. She quickly placed a hand behind his head and deepened it.

We were free…

Well, this was my very first song-fic. Didn't think I'd ever try this, but after hearing this song, it gave me enough influence to try it out. Now, that song does not end happily, but I wanted a better ending than that. So I decided a little change was in order. If that annoyed you, I'm sorry. I tend to be a sucker for happy endings. So what did you think?