I don't own Inu-Yasha or any of the characters in my story in this
chapter
This is my first fic and I accept criticism but please be a little easy on me. ;)
Kagome sat there and watch in horror as Inu-Yasha fought with Naraku. All she could do was sit and pray that her beloved Inu would make it out alive. Naraku laughed evilly as he struck Inu with the final blow that sent him a few feet from Kagome. Naraku laughed once more before disappearing into the night.
Kagome ran to the bloody hanyou's side. Inu grasped Kagome hand and pulled her closer to him, he coughed and blood poured from his mouth. He breathed a rasping sharp and painful breath before saying his final words, "Kagome I love you" with that the bloody hanyou went limp with death (I know this has been done so many times it's kinda getting old but o well I like it ^_^).
Shippou, Sango, and Miroku rushed to Kagome's side as she collapsed on Inu's bloody body covered in his blood. She wept bitterly asking God why He took Inu-Yasha away. No one could comfort her in her time of grief. Kagome was also injured from the battle with Naraku and passed out from lack of blood and great grief.
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Sesshomaru stepped outside of his place with Rin following him closely. He sniffed the air and he could smell blood, lots of blood. He called Jakan and told him to take GOOD care of Rin while he was gone. He then left.
He arrived about 15 min. later at the place where Kagome was mourning over his half brothers death. He arrived just in time to see her pass out. He heard a small voice in the back of his head telling him to take her with him. This was the girl his hanyou brother loved, the one who had broken the spell, the one who never feared him, BUT most of all the one he secretly desired.
He strolled over to her and picked her up. He glared at everyone else as if daring them to fight with him. Shippou ran over to Sesshomaru and pleadingly looked at him and then at Kagome. Sesshomaru said, "I'm taking her to protect her, I promise I won't kill her unless she pisses me off." Shippou again looked pleadingly up at Sesshomaru and Sesshomaru catching his intention growled that he could come with.
This is my first fic and I accept criticism but please be a little easy on me. ;)
Kagome sat there and watch in horror as Inu-Yasha fought with Naraku. All she could do was sit and pray that her beloved Inu would make it out alive. Naraku laughed evilly as he struck Inu with the final blow that sent him a few feet from Kagome. Naraku laughed once more before disappearing into the night.
Kagome ran to the bloody hanyou's side. Inu grasped Kagome hand and pulled her closer to him, he coughed and blood poured from his mouth. He breathed a rasping sharp and painful breath before saying his final words, "Kagome I love you" with that the bloody hanyou went limp with death (I know this has been done so many times it's kinda getting old but o well I like it ^_^).
Shippou, Sango, and Miroku rushed to Kagome's side as she collapsed on Inu's bloody body covered in his blood. She wept bitterly asking God why He took Inu-Yasha away. No one could comfort her in her time of grief. Kagome was also injured from the battle with Naraku and passed out from lack of blood and great grief.
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Sesshomaru stepped outside of his place with Rin following him closely. He sniffed the air and he could smell blood, lots of blood. He called Jakan and told him to take GOOD care of Rin while he was gone. He then left.
He arrived about 15 min. later at the place where Kagome was mourning over his half brothers death. He arrived just in time to see her pass out. He heard a small voice in the back of his head telling him to take her with him. This was the girl his hanyou brother loved, the one who had broken the spell, the one who never feared him, BUT most of all the one he secretly desired.
He strolled over to her and picked her up. He glared at everyone else as if daring them to fight with him. Shippou ran over to Sesshomaru and pleadingly looked at him and then at Kagome. Sesshomaru said, "I'm taking her to protect her, I promise I won't kill her unless she pisses me off." Shippou again looked pleadingly up at Sesshomaru and Sesshomaru catching his intention growled that he could come with.