This page serves as a table of contents and information screen.
Section 1: Reviews.
First order of business, I would kindly ask for people to review. I will admit that I'm human and enjoy hearing positive reinforcement that won't make me tear my heart out in depression. I will also ask that people give me some tips to improve my writing. If your review isn't constructive in any way, or encouraging, I will reply in a way that you don't like. I have seen stories where authors get reviews that aren't really reviews. They're more like threats. "If you don't do this, I'll make sure you're removed from the site" and that sort of bullshit. Don't even try.
Section 2: Writing Style.
I will warn you right now. I have a tendency to change my writing style monthly. It usually follows the style of what I read. Right now it is the fusion of two books that I have read in English, one which is a post-apocalyptic thriller and the other which centers around death. The random blurbs and foreshadowing is from the death one, while the disjointed sentences is from the first. This is as of 6/16/12.
Section 3: Chapter Summaries.
This will be updated continually and will allow previews of the next chapter. To figure out how many people are actually reading this, I may do some fun stuff and trivia to let people determine how my story will turn out.
Prologue: Green Eyes in the Night.
An introduction of the characters Harry and Brendon, twins. Those who know of the movies and books will have a start when they realize that the only similarity of cannon Harry and this one are the green eyes.
Prologue: Red eyes in the Night.
Space and time travel sends Harry and Brendon to an alternate dimension before Harry is marked to be killed. Harry wakes up at Privet Drive and takes control of Vernon Dursley. Petunia is oblivious.
Prologue: A Key to Unlock the Door.
This title alludes to Kingdom Hearts. Harry, having found out about his sharingan, later awakens his powers over darkness and nothingness. We get to also see some of Harry's powers.
Prologue: An Impure World of Purity
This chapter begins with some new powers. We also get to see Dumbledor scream "Holy Shit!" Harry is summoned by Edo Tensei, with the technique thinking that he's Madara. This chapter is a bit of crack and a bit of action. It makes fun of Gaara, Sasuke and Itachi Uchiha, and points out some anime clichés. It ends with a fight between Harry, Gaara, and Kabuto.
Prologue: A Warrior of Light.
A dedication to Brendon Potter and his training with Dumbledor, and the showing of our friend Hermione Granger.
Prologue: An Impure World of Purity part II
An ending to the first big fight, and an introduction to several important people from the organization Akatsuki.
Prologue: A Kick to the Head, A Kick to the Heart.
Gaara awakens. What starts as conversation turns into argument and finally a cruel acceptance. With Ron, it becomes a tangible hate.
Prologue: A Warrior of Light: Awakening and Betrayal.
After a heartless attack, Brendon shows up in the station of awakening. This chapter also includes Hermione's government problems and another person finds out about Ron's secret.
Prologue: A Kickass Warrior of Light.
What challenges does Ron face in the place he goes? And what happened to that particular… book?
Section 4: Characters (Prologue)
HARRY'S SIDE
Harry Potter: With the experiences of so many dark men, Harry can only look at the evil in life. He sees the corruption and fallout of the world, and sees himself as the only hope for the future. He has decided that the only way to bring peace is to rule with an iron fist and force people into peace. Harry is pessimistic by nature and very demanding. He dislikes being ordered around, but he knows tact and when to do what. His only priority is to become strong and rule the world.
Abilities:
Basic immortality- unable to die with age or disease.
Fast regeneration- heals at an accelerated pace. The speed of healing depends on the size of the wound. Everything can regenerate except for brain, heart, or head.
Sharingan eyes-
Eye of day: level 1- conjure inanimate objects. Size and power is based on energy used.
Level 2- Bring inanimate objects to life and make people believe anything he says as long as nothing disproves what he says.
Level 3- Fireproofing.
Eye of Desire: Level 1- Rewrite people's minds and memories and take direct control of people's bodies' for a short while. Cast unparalleled illusions.
Level 2- Control what everybody sees and knows with eye contact and insane power over own mind.
Level 3- Ability to insert memories into anything, making every memory a reality. This works on inanimate objects as well.
Control over heartless
Keyblade of darkness- a keyblade capable of turning any heart to darkness. If the hate in that heart is strong enough, the heartless will retain a human appearance.
Dark magic- certain magic that has a core of black magic. It is the opposite of elemental magic.
Chakra- a mixture of physical and spiritual power. Stronger than magic, but not as versatile.
Acid and Corrosive manipulation
Tenseiga- a sword capable of resurrecting the dead souls of fallen comrades. The owner must have a vacant body and must know the resurrectee to resurrect the person. Also able to heal practically any wound.
Bakuseiga- Amplifies power exponentially. Capable of widespread destruction. Most useful when there aren't any allies on the field.
Jack of all trades proficiency- is insanely good at most arts such as sword fighting and hand to hand.
Vernon Dursley: The husband of Petunia, if you haven't guessed. At first, he was completely against the idea of Harry entering their home, but after some 'convincing', he changed completely. Harry rewrote his past to make him believe that he was born and raised to be Harry's slave and guardian. And thus began the worship and exuberant love he held towards Harry and all that the god was. Vernon would do anything for Harry. Anything.
THE LIGHT SIDE
Albus Dumbledor: The manipulator. He looks at the dark and scoffs. He will do anything to make light prevail over darkness. His greatest pawns are Harry and Brendon. He pushes Harry as the next dark lord, and with his influence, he has made Harry out to be the world's greatest antagonist. He teaches Brendon to be the leader of peace, and is using him to take down Harry as practice for the rising of Voldemort. His disposition to light is so great, it attracted the nameless beings of light…
Abilities:
Proficient Wand magic- magic done through a medium such as a wand or staff. Very versatile and powerful.
Knowledge- he is simply very wise and able to think things through.
UNKOWNS
Brendon Potter: He is delusional in the sense that he can only see his brother Harry in a positive light, and doesn't know why. Even after all of the crap fed to him by everybody else, he can't get the notion of 'good Harry' out of his head. He is slightly arrogant, but is not a snob. He cares for everybody and has a very innocent mindset. His main goal is to prove Harry's innocence of everything people are blaming him for.
Abilities:
Elemental magic- the opposite of dark magic. Bends elements to his will by calling out the name.
Wand magic- magic done through a medium such as a wand or staff. Very versatile.
Hermione Granger: She is a happy-go-lucky girl that sees the good in everything. She trusts easily, but because of her strange powers, she doesn't make friends easily. One of her best friends is Anthony Oak. She is also very smart book wise. She can memorize anything.
Abilities:
Lightning elemental- can do pretty much anything with electricity. This includes power over the nervous system.
Ron Weasly: A brash half demon that was born with the memories of Inuyasha Taicho of the dog demons. He is fairly stupid, but has a good heart. While many accept him, his father, after finding out, resents him secretly. He hasn't told Molly of his hatred. Yet.
Abilities:
Blood energy- using the demonic power in his blood, he can supercharge his body to throw fast and powerful attacks at others.
Basic wand magic- he is inexperienced at using wand magic, but knows the basics.
AKATSUKI
Arthur Weasly: This man seeks to bring peace by destroying the world's corrupt governments. He holds very idealistic views on everything and knows what he likes and doesn't like. When he saw his son as a demon, they had a falling out because Arthur believes that demons don't deserve to exist in a perfect society. He hopes for a brighter future, but determines everybody's fates with but a glance.
Abilities:
Chakra- a mixture of physical and spiritual power. Stronger than magic, but not as versatile.
Wand magic- magic done through a medium such as a wand or staff. Versatile.
Sharingan eyes-
Eye of rage: level 1- throws people into uncontrollable rages.
Level 2- ?
Eye of loss: level 1-creates illusions that show people the loss of their loved ones
Level 2- precognitive powers showing the death of those he is near.
Juan Erikson: He was born in the United States of America to two less than perfect parents. After running away, he became proficient in fighting and won many international martial arts tournaments. He is a firm believer in fate and believes that it is his fate to bring all evil to justice. He also worships Arthur Weasley for the man's great and noble goals.
Abilities:
Byakugan- eyes that grant almost 360 degrees and above. Can also see through objects.
Hand to hand proficiency- can fight an opponent in hand to hand and win almost always.
MISCELLANEOUS
Petunia Dursley: Before she dies a horrible death… she doesn't really hate magic. She was just jealous towards her sister for having things she doesn't. After many years, she realized her folly and wanted to make it up to her, but Lily was dead by then. She goes to the next best person and that is Harry. She is nice to him for selfish reasons- to take the guilt away. She is kind and helpful to others, though we don't see that, because it isn't important to the story. What is, is Harry's so called 'friendship' with her.
Anthony Oak: The betrayer. His life centers around betrayal. Everybody betrayed him, and in turn, he lives and thrives off of the pain. He is a pyromaniac, but has shown no outward specialty… yet.
Section 5: Theory
For the sharingan, it is stated in the show and manga that every eye is different (even though for some reason everybody can spew out amaterasu and such). I took this idea and gave each eye a symbol and centered the abilities around that symbol. I'm planning to do the same with the rin'negan and its basis in the realm of reality and life/death.
Chakra is physical and mental energy. Demonic energy is also like chakra, only one would change the physical aspect with a darker nature aspect which is more potent. Magic is of a spiritual aspect and grows with the soul. The levels of each one affect that of the others. As one rises, the others rise, as well. The amount that one would influence another is the amount one would jump if the first was to rise.
Section 6: Challenge Influence
This section is for challenges that I will issue to people. I would like responses in the reviews. The first line of a review will be the answer, and the following lines will be your response to what I allow. If I say that the third person with the correct answer gets to choose whatever character dies, then you may put how they die and which character, etc. after the answer.
The current ones are:
Q: What is the technical term for a goldfish?
Your answer will allow you to decide number 2 through 10 in Akatsuki. Multiple people allowed, and all answers will be considered.
Q: Where do I live? Be more specific than country.
Your answer will determine what character will have the worst time with Harry. As in, who should Harry pwn into next year when he arrives and people try to kill him for being evil as they're all told? Can't be Dumbledor or Hermione or Draco. (I have special plans for Draco.)
Q: What object of power will Harry get to achieve the Rin'negan?
Your answer will let you make other characters to be reincarnations. You choose the reincarnation, abilities, and background of the characters and their affiliation. This is open to all, and I will use the ones that I agree with. I will not tell you if you are right or wrong, either, until I get to the part. It will be after Harry begins schooling. The question will change frequently, but the reward will stay the same.
Section 7: Techniques used.
WAND SPELLS:
Pennata Inspiratione- The holy version of the bludgeoning hex. It beats darkness like a wife beats her husband.
COMMAND SPELLS:
Fire- Gives some power over fire. What this spell does is dependent on the person's will and imagination.
CHAKRA TECHNIQUES:
Midnight Fire Style: Crimson Black Cremation- gives fire the qualities of darkness making it burn eternally. It only stops burning when there is nothing left of the targeted victim. One can evade it easily because it is slow. If one is hit, they must cut off the offending limb, or suffer death. It is said that the heat can be felt even in the soul…
Section 8: Notes.
6/19/12- If you are reading this, start a review as "I think that your first page is stupid" and then begin the next part as "I think you should…" and state what you want me to do for the fourth year tri-wizard tournament. Some things to consider are if you want to have different trials and mysteries to build up to those trials, should Harry be in the tournament at all, if both Harry and Brendon should be in it, how Harry can humiliate Voldemort and still allow the man to live, etc. I will use multiple ideas from multiple people. This is just to see how many people actually read this part. If you don't want to respond to anything, then just write "Yes, that is all." And put your review afterwards, if any.
7/19/12- Sorry about the long wait, but I was on vacation and am about to go on vacation once more. I'll update in two weeks when I get back.