kkies so...this is a story I started back in lyke 2003, so it's kinda old. my writing style has def. changed since then. I'll still post some new chapters, I have 1 more waiting, but I plan to at least have 12-18 chapters or w/e. so without furthur ado, enjoy...
Kasumi relaxed in the meadow taking all of the beautiful sights that surrounded her. She sat on a pink and white-checkered picnic blanket as a golden butterfly flew pass her then unexpectedly landed on her extended hand. She kissed it gently then let it go on its way. She then turned around to see the man of her dreams stand right in front of her… Hayate.

"Hayate, how did you know I was here?" Kasumi asked.

"I always know where you are, I'm a friend, a guardian, and a lover." Hayate said, moving in closer for a kiss.

'I'm finally going to get the kiss I've been longing for.' Kasumi thought. Right at that moment, when their lips where about to touch, Kasumi felt a funny wet, ticking sensation on her face.

"Roof, Roof."

Her dog, Sushi, barked. "Oh, Sushi, why couldn't you wait until after Hayate kissed me? Don't you want me to be happy?" Kasumi asked, wiping off her face with a tissue. "Kasumi-Chan, breakfast!" Her mom called from downstairs. "Okay, coming!" Kasumi yelled back.

Kasumi got out of bed; picked out a blue sleeveless turtleneck, pink plaid skirt, black leather boots, and a white gold bracelet on each wrist. She grabbed her purse, and walked down the steps and towards the kitchen. "Hello, Kasumi, are you excited for the day?" Her mother asked, handing her a plate with bacon, eggs, and two pancakes. "It's the last day of school, who isn't?" Ayane butted in.

She seemed to come out of nowhere at times. "Hi, Ayane." Kasumi said. "Hi." Ayane said, taking a seat. "Well, I am going to miss some of my friends." Kasumi said sadly. "What are you talking about, they all live in this neighborhood." Her mom stated.

"Oh, yeah." Kasumi said. "The bus is going to be here any minute, you better get outside." Her mom said, clearing the table. "Bye." Ayane and Kasumi said in unison. Once they walked out of the door, Ayane started to talk about what this summer might be like. "Maybe it'll be fun, or boring, or both." Ayane went on. "Don't think to hard, you'll kill all of your brain cells." Kasumi said.

Ahead a few feet stood the bus stop and there on bench sat Leifang and Jann Lee, bickering as usual. "Hey look, it's the quarrelsome lovers." Ayane said, loud enough for them to here. "We don't like each other!" They yelled together.

"Sure, just keep telling yourselves that." Kasumi said, sitting down in between them. "So, are you guys looking forward to the summer?" Kasumi asked. "Yes, I can't wait. I have my whole summer planned out on my palm pilot." Leifang said. "Hey look guys, here comes Tina." Jann Lee said. "Hey ya'll," Tina greeted. "Nice day isn't it?" She asked. "Beautiful." Kasumi said.

"Where's the bus, it was supposed to be here exactly a minute ago." Ayane said, obviously annoyed. "Hey, that's a really cute watch." Tina commented. "Thanks." Ayane said. "Hi guys, what's up?!" Hitomi said, running towards the bus stop.

"Hi Hitomi." They all said. "I thought for sure that I was going to miss the bus for sure." Hitomi said, catching her breath. "No sign of it yet." Jann Lee said, playing a game on his cell phone.

"Guess who I saw walking to school when I came up here." Hitomi said enthusiastically. "Who?" Tina asked. "One word. Hayate." Hitomi said. "Oh, he is so hot." All the girls said. "What about me? Ain't I hot?" Jann Lee asked, standing up.

"Don't flatter yourself." Leifang said, pulling him back down. "Here's the bus." Kasumi said. They all stood in a single file line and waited to board the bus. They all got on the bus and took a seat and the bus rode on its way to the high school. About five minutes later, the bus arrived in front of the school and let out all of the passengers. "Well it's the last day; I hope I can make it though." Kasumi said to herself.

"Bonjour, madam!" Helena waved frantically.

"Hi Helena, how are you?"

Helena stared to move herself towards Kasumi. "So, it's the last day of the year and I'm having my annual 'End of the school year' party." Helena said. "I know it's next Friday, right? You've thrown one every year since 4th grade." Kasumi asked.

"Correct! And I always manage top the one before it." Helena went on. "I'm going to e-mail everyone else their invitations but you get a V.I.P. pass." Helena said, pulling a golden card out of her purse. "This is for you." Helena said, handing Kasumi the card.

"V.I.P. Helena, are you serious?" Kasumi asked. "Why sure. Why wouldn't I be?" Helena asked. "Well, you haven't really even gotten to notice me this year." Kasumi said. "If fact, you haven't noticed me at all."

"Oh, don't be serious. You've always been 'cool girl' material. I've been observing you. Okay, bye." Helena said, taking off. Then the bell rings to signal that the final school day is staring.


so...did u lyke it????? i know it's kinda weird rite now, but i promise it'll get soooooo much better. NOW GO COMMENT!!!!!! lolz.