Hey everyone. This is my first FanFic. Sorry if its unclear and confusing. It takes me awhile to come up with a story. I based the story on The Amazing Spider-Man movie on a different point of view. I added in a few new characters and kept the main ones too (Dr Conners, Gwen Stacy, Peter Parker/Spider-Man, Captain Stacy, and so on. Please tell me what you think about it and what I can change. I do have to edit this chapter but my computer is broken (I'm using my parents laptop). Enjoy.
Chapter 1
Where is he? Did he decide not to come take me home? Why would he just ditch me? I just wanted to cry. It was bad enough that David West, my band mate and ex-boyfriend (awkward) didn't want to come to the public library and help me think of new songs our band can sing for open mic-night, but I had to bring Peter along with me for company. My parents didn't want me out on the streets of New York City, and I couldn't blame them. There have been many crimes, accidents, and murders out in the city lately. But bring Peter Parker with me? He's the type of person who doesn't like trouble, or try to start anything. He wouldn't be able to protect me if something-or someone- tried to hurt us. *Sigh* If only I knew…
My thoughts were whisked away as a women screamed for help. I ran toward the voice, but stopped when I saw what was going on. She was cornered into a dark ally. A dangerous gang surrounded her. The tallest one, pulling out a knife smiled at her. I pressed myself against the rigged brick wall facing away from them. How are people not noticing this? I questioned myself. How can people just sneak a glance at the situation and not care? I pulled out my phone (for once I kept it on) and was ready to dial 911. Out of the blue, a man in a skin-tight red and blue suit wearing a red mask swung down to them. "What the hell is he doing here?" One of the men asked.
"Oh I was just taking a nice walk down this dark ally when I noticed 'hmm… something wasn't right.' " I had to smile-that lame remark was kind of funny -when I realized something. I heard that voice before. It sounds familiar. Could it be? No, Peter doesn't like confrontation. But that voice is so familiar. As soon as the gang glanced at each other, the man in the suit raised his arms and shot out an unknown substance. Looking closer, I realized that the silver, shiny substance looked like… spider webs? What the… I stopped in mid-sentence when one of the robbers had been forced back into the wall by the web. He was stuck. Amazing. How the hell did he do this? I saw the masked man dodge the taller thug-probably the leader -knife. It was as if he sensed it was coming. He grabbed the outstretched arm and flipped him over. The thug was out cold. How is Peter Parker, my best –and practically only -friend missing this? On the way back from the library, he told me he had to call his Aunt May. "Ever since Uncle Ben died, she's been more worried than ever," Peter explained to me one day at school.
"Why?" I questioned. He just looked down at the concrete to the Midtown Science High School. I should have kept my stupid mouth shut. Of course I knew why. Peter lived with his Aunt May and Uncle Ben. He didn't really know his parents so well. They disappeared when Peter was only four. Almost two weeks ago, his Uncle Ben was shot by a robber. I looked away from Peter, knowing how stupid I sounded. Everyone knew about the night his uncle was murdered. Now that I think about it, where in the world is Peter. It can't take this long to call his aunt, unless she was angry at him for staying out after 9. I was brought back from the memory when the masked man -I've heard some people call him 'Spider-Man'- kicked one of the man in the jaw. Ouch, that ought to hurt. The woman was still screaming in fear as she watched. One man came out of the dark shadows and slashed his knife at Spider-Man, grazing his arm. As Spider-Man let out a soft cry, the man came for him again. This time though, he grabbed his mask and yanked it. I clapped a hand over my mouth to prevent the scream from getting out. There, in a red and blue suit was a boy my age. There, was the familiar dark brown hair that sometimes looked lighter in the sunlight. There, was that beautiful pale skin that made his bruises more noticeable. There, were those beautiful dark chocolate brown eyes that I knew so well. There, standing in front of the thug, was Peter Parker.
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Peter was shocked. Not many people had tried to pull off his mask. It was actually pretty scary. What if they knew who I was? Before he even realized what he was doing, he shot a strand of web at the thugs face. It blinded him for a second, but that was all Peter needed. He gave the guy a round kick to his legs but somehow accidentally hit him a little higher than necessary. As the thug toppled over in pain, he quickly grabbed his mask and put it on before facing the woman. "Are you okay?" The woman nodded. "Good. I'm going to need you to call the police and tell them..." his sentence was cut short when he heard sirens cutting through the night. Crap. He ran toward the building and climbed up. As he got up, he shot a string of web from his web-slingers and swung into the night. He was to busy focusing on getting away from the police that he didn't a girl with raven black hair and blue eyes leaning on a wall, watching him.
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I watched him carefully; swinging from building to building with those things –was it called web shooters?- somehow holding the weight of his body with that skinny piece of web. People around me also began to direct their attention toward Pete- Spider-Man. Peter? No way in hell is that Peter! He's probably at home texting Gwen, getting yelled at by his Aunt May for breaking curfew, or even doing homework. He's defiantly not running around the city during the night stopping criminals. But the more I tried to convince myself, the more I doubted it. It couldn't be Peter. Peter Parker, my best friend in the world, is not Spider-Man!
Peter Parker is not Spider-Man.
Peter Parker is not Spider-Man.
Peter Parker is not Spider-Man.
Peter Parker is Spider-Man.
Again, sorry if this is a confusing chapter I still need to edit it. Did you guys like it. Please tell me what I can change to make it better. Thanks.
P.S expect updates soon.