~READ THIS AUTHORS NOTE~
If you like my story "High school criminals" I want you all to know that I'm redoing it as well but it is now called Crime and Passion and it is completely different than the original; there isn't much that is the same! So please go back and read it! I promise you that it is so much better!
A little under a year ago I adopted this story out to someone, but for the life of me I can't remember who and that person never did anything with it so I'm starting it over because I have had a lot of people ask me what happen to the story and that they want to see it on FanFiction once again so I decided to fix it up and finish it.
I intend to redo this story, so that it has more of a plot and a better story line. I really do hope that you all enjoy it more that you did!
Idon't own the "Divergent" series what so ever,
But I do own "Disarm" and all the mistakes that I may have made and over looked...Sorry!
~This will be a better version of my story~
"Disarm"
(The killer in me is the killer in you)
without further ado...
CHAPTER 1
~Eric~
(At first sight)
It has been one hell of a week for me and with my new position as the youngest dauntless leader, it only makes it that much harder and stressful.
I really need to find me a divergent and kill that piece of shit rebel slowly just to release all this stress. That sounds bad, I know but it's what I do and I'm good at it! All divergent's go bad at some point. It's something to do with the way they are wired. They are crazy and will destroy the world around us if we let them.
For example, my aunt was divergent and went undetected up until the day she drowned her three year old daughter in the bath tub then stabbed her husband in the throat. They all go bad at some point and its my job to sniff them out and end them. It's what I do and I am good at it.
I'm currently on my way to a meeting with Jeanine to give her my report on the two divergent rebels that I disposed of last week after initiation was over. I'm so sick of doing this shit by my damn self, fuck I wish that bitch would find someone to send to dauntless to help me. The problem is that there are too damn many squeamish dumb asses that can't handle a little blood on their hands, chicken shits.
"I said let me go assholes!" I hear a strong female voice yell from a darkened ally.
I look over into the ally behind a falling down building and see a young abnegation girl trying to fight off two faction-less men and if it wasn't for the fact that it's two against one, the little girl would be doing a damn good job at kicking their asses. For an abnegation girl that is...
I like her fire so I decide that I want to help her out. "Hey!" I yell at the cowards as I run up to the scene. "Why don't you fuckers come and try that shit with me?"
Both men turn towards me and as soon as they do the girl punches the shit out of the one closest to her, knocking him completely out and the other guy tries to take off but I grab him and throw him to the ground and press my foot to his throat hard, cutting off his airway.
I look up at the girl as the man struggles beneath my foot and feel my body react to her beauty and bravery. Who the fuck is this girl? "Are you okay?" I ask her raising my eyebrow at the look she's giving the dirty man that is out cold at her feet.
Jesus Christ this tiny girl packs a mean fucking punch!
The girl let out a haunting laugh that sends chills down my spine. "I'm fantastic!" She say sarcastically, not taking her eyes off the guy that is still down for the count.
I shake my head and look down at the guy that I'm holding down just as he passes out. "I'll dispose of these assholes darlin." Darlin? Really? "Just get out of here so you won't be implicated in this." I tell her pulling my knife out out of it's holder that's strapped to my ankle.
The girl snaps her head towards me quickly and fuck me this girl is beautifully deranged! I fucking want her. The look and smile she's giving me has my heart pounding and my body responding wildly.
"Can you show me how? I want to be the one to kill them! Well, can I kill at least one of them?" She smiles sweetly at me. "Please!" She give me a look that is innocent yet a little seductive, and now I'm shocked and a little turned on.
I can honestly say that I will give this girl anything she ask of me.
"If you think you can handle it darlin." I tell her with a grin plastered on my face as I hand her my knife.
She grabs the knife from my hands and holds it like a fucking pro. Who is this girl?
I shake my head and move behind her. "Lift him up and grab his hair then tilt his head back against your shoulder and put the knife to his throat." I help her by pulling her back against my chest and holding most of the mans dead weight. "Yep, just like that darlin. Now apply as much pressure as you can with the blade to his throat and pull the knife across his neck swiftly." I instruct her and fuck me, she actually does it! "Holy shit sugar, you did it and damn near decapitated him...shit girl that was awesome!" I smile just as an idea forms in my mind and a wicked grin spreads across my lips as she drops the man next to his buddy. But before I can say a word the tiny girl speaks up.
"Is that a bad thing?" She asks as she leans over the other guy and buries the blade in his chest, all the way to the fucking hilt.
Shit I want this angle. I want her in dauntless by my side and in my arms. I just simply fucking want her. All of her.
"No, it's not; it was fucking perfect darlin, both times sugar. You are a natural, like me." I grin down at her as she stands. "How old are you?" I move even closer her.
"Fifteen, why?" She looks up at me and I find myself getting lost in her gorgeous green eyes.
"So you choose next year?" I ask her as I tuck a stray hair behind her small ear.
She nods her head slowly at my question. "How do you feel about me training you to be a warrior until then." Her eyes light up at this. "When it's time, you come join me in dauntless. I've been looking for someone like you that is capable and strong enough to help me in a very bloody job and you are very fucking perfect...for this line of work!" I grin as I grabbing her hands and helping her get the blood off.
She bites her delectable bottom lip. "Help you do what exactly?" She asks raising her chin to look me in the eye.
"Hunt divergent's of coarse," I tell her and smile at her. Man, this girl is really fucking beautiful!
"How old are you?" She asks me with a grin and I'm shocked that, that's her first question.
"Seventeen, why?" I ask her.
"Just wondering." Her smile widens "Is that all that you do in dauntless?"
"No, when I'm not hunting divergent rebels I'm a dauntless leader!" I smirk as her breath hitches. "It's a secret that I hunt divergent's, so your first two murders will always stay a secret between you and me darlin! So not a word you got it and I'll give you the same respect!" I tell her and she nods.
"You are so young!" She smiles as I pull her away from the ally, heading toward abnegation!
"Age doesn't matter in dauntless!" I tell her.
"What does matter in dauntless?" She counters.
"Your skill, bravery, and rank in initiation of coarse." I say shrugging my shoulders as we continue to walk at a slow pace. I'm not ready for her to be out of my sight.
"I'll do it." She grins up at me after a few minutes of silence.
"Good answer." I nudge her shoulder playfully. "Meet me at this address tomorrow at noon, and don't be late." I take out a piece of paper and write down the address of the old training building beside the dauntless compound and hand it to her as we make it to the abnegation sector. "I'm assuming that you can jump a moving train." I raise an eyebrow in question.
"Yes, and thanks for walking me back, not that I need it when I still have your knife." she smile at me as she tries to hand it back to me.
I love that knife. It's my favorite.
"Keep it." I tell her while smiling back at her.
"Beatrice." She whispers.
"What?" I ask tilting my head to the side.
"My name, it's Beatrice Prior." She laughs and I find that I am absolutely captivated by that chilling sound.
"Nope, I'll call you Tris. It suites you better." I wink at her and begin to walk off.
"Hey what's your name?" She calls out to me.
I stop walking and turn my head to look over my shoulder at her. "Eric, Eric Coulter and see you tomorrow gorgeous." I wink at her and take off towards Erudite with the biggest fucking smile on my face.
Finally someone that has the potential that I've been looking for. I think I'll smile the rest of the day and freak good old number boy out.
Stranger things have happened.
So I'm hoping that you guys liked this story enough to read it again.
There will be major changes, so it wont be the same.
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