Author's note:
ok, I have a really odd story to write (thanks to my sister, who is collaborating with me in this project.), and I want to give you the basic facts so you're not like, "what the hell is this crazy girl talking about?"
so, I just wanted to say that I kinda changed Grievous's past a bit. His name is still Qymaen Jai Sheelal, but he's a Zabrack, not a Kaleesh. I dunno why, but my sis wants it and this is her story. Also, the reason he hates the Jedi is that they killed his girlfriend, not 'cause they hurt the people. And his girlfriend is a Togruta named Marie Lij Kummar.
If you're confused about anything, you can PM me and I'll be happy to answer any questions. Yeah, I know I changed his past a bit, (ok, maybe a lot), but that's how my sis wanted it, and this is my b-day present to her, so, here goes nothing...
Characters, Names, Planets, and all else belong to George Lucas and co. Exept for the Character Marie. But her species and last and middle name belong to them.
Ok, I think that's it.