Hello the story will finally begin yay so let's get some things straight creative criticism is okay but full out flaming is out of the question remember suggestions are always welcome Thanks to HyperJuggernaut foe the title
James's POV
Today was a really good I had been thinking about it all month and I was finally going to ask Marie Levine out. As my cabin walked over to archery class I felt a figure push against me
"Oh sorry James" said the small figure that moved to hide behind me.
"What's wrong September Marie?" I said to my younger sibling. If you're wondering why I bothered to call her such a long name, I did it for love of my life. September Marie would crack if you just called her September. You could call it her berserk button I guess.
"Hiding I'm not going to archery today "she said very matter of factly.
"Who are you hiding from?" I said even though I had a pretty good idea.
"Salex" she said
"Did somebody call my name" said the reason she was hiding behind me
"Yes September Marie did" said Niome as she fixed her glasses. September didn't get mad though as we all knew what would happen next
"But" she continued "She had a good reason to be hiding"
"What good reason" said Salex
"We all hate archery and don't want to go" said Niome with a emotionless tone as always.
"That's true" he said mocking Niome's tone of voice "But" he continued no longer with her voice "As a counselor I can't just let us skip archery" was all he said as he headed for the archery range . When he realized we weren't coming he started walking backwards and tried to sound like a order "All three of you get over here were going to arche-" he then got cut of when he ran into Katashi.
"What's wrong with you" said the girl next to him. I almost started drooling when Niome stared at me and said "You should close your mouth or a fly might fly in there." "Umh sorry" I said still staring at her
"Dude she's hot" I turned to see Nicholas Dorium with his friend Jaxon Cotton both staring at the girl next to Katashi. Behind them stood both the Aphrodite cabin and the Hephaestus cabins I personaly did not think it was a good idea and apparently neither did Niome.
"Excuse me but if I were you I would like move your cabins lines before the Aphrodite cabin gives them both unnecessary make-overs." She told Nicholas, but he really didn't pay attentionand started tugging at her braids.
"You know, you should really get both of these removed" he said as he pulled them.
"You do know that braids are not body parts and she can't remove them without cutting her hair. Or are you just that dumb?" asked Shelbie the head councilor of the Athena cabin. Nicholas looked shoked at removing Niome's hair. They looked at each other like they might fight and Niome tried to run off
"Oh look it's Haru and Loxetta I'm just like gonna go over there kay" with that she left towards the Hecate line.
"Niome gonna and kay aren't words" I said "Whatever" she responded already at the Hecate line.
"This is getting so uncomfterible so I'm going to take of see if Liam is here already" said September Marie excusing herself, but as she ran off she bumped into the girl that was standing next to Katashi who I now recognized as Elizabeta.
"Are all Persephone children so clumsy" she screamed at September Marie, but when she looked again she was gone.
Katashi whispered something in her ear and she continued giving me the death glare.
A few minutes later when I really couldn't stand it Salex finally came back
"Come on" he told me "It's going to be like a competition and since were like-" I gave him a puzzled look "Sorry Niome's rubbing off on me. Where was I? oh yeah. Since were one of the worst cabins we have to go last" When we started going he turned to me and said "Were are September Marie and Niome?"
I was about to explain when Kenya and Cassidy came looking worried.
"What's wrong" I asked
"We can't find Marie Levine" they both told me at the same time
Okay that's the first chapter any ideas don't be hesitant to say. Now I probably won't update for a long time since I'm kind of grounded so yeah don't get mad