He was brave, he was standing against the most violent monster to have ever
threatened the earth. And he was going to kick his butt.
He was winning, he was in the lead. But he let his pride get in the way. He would make him suffer. After all, making him suffer for what he did would teach him for messing with his planet, and with his friends, and his family. And if his father, who was telling to kill him, didn't understand the way he felt towards this beast that wasn't his problem.
His father didn't understand, and maybe that's why he did it. The last words he ever said to his son was, "Goodbye." For he knew he would never see him again.
He didn't mean for his father to do that. But he did it anyway. And even if someone tried to stop it from happening, somehow, it would still happen.
Of course he knew his father did it to save him. But he was still guilty for it. If he had killed the evil beast, his father wouldn't have done it.
And if his father hadn't done it, his mother wouldn't have either. And if his mother hadn't done it, he wouldn't be alone now. He would have a happy family. If only he hadn't let his pride get in the way.
His father wouldn't have given up his life. And his mother wouldn't have been depressed.
And life would be great.
But it wasn't. He was 13 years old, and he was alone.
He would always be alone, no matter where he went, or who he was with. He would always be alone. That was that.
His mother's friend offered to let him live with her, her husband, and her son. But no, he refused openly, without thinking, "No." It was the only thing he said.
So now he was all alone, at 13, in middle of the forest, with no living family members except his little baby brother, who was saved before his mother truly died. A little boy, that looked far too much like his father.
But forever he would care for him.
*~*~*~*~ The End. *~*~*~*~
I'm happy for the review I got. It doesn't matter if it wasn't a praise or anything. And "me" thank you for your critismism, I would really like it if you told me how I could make it better, seeing as I just started it, and I want to make it as good as I'm able to. Thanks.
He was winning, he was in the lead. But he let his pride get in the way. He would make him suffer. After all, making him suffer for what he did would teach him for messing with his planet, and with his friends, and his family. And if his father, who was telling to kill him, didn't understand the way he felt towards this beast that wasn't his problem.
His father didn't understand, and maybe that's why he did it. The last words he ever said to his son was, "Goodbye." For he knew he would never see him again.
He didn't mean for his father to do that. But he did it anyway. And even if someone tried to stop it from happening, somehow, it would still happen.
Of course he knew his father did it to save him. But he was still guilty for it. If he had killed the evil beast, his father wouldn't have done it.
And if his father hadn't done it, his mother wouldn't have either. And if his mother hadn't done it, he wouldn't be alone now. He would have a happy family. If only he hadn't let his pride get in the way.
His father wouldn't have given up his life. And his mother wouldn't have been depressed.
And life would be great.
But it wasn't. He was 13 years old, and he was alone.
He would always be alone, no matter where he went, or who he was with. He would always be alone. That was that.
His mother's friend offered to let him live with her, her husband, and her son. But no, he refused openly, without thinking, "No." It was the only thing he said.
So now he was all alone, at 13, in middle of the forest, with no living family members except his little baby brother, who was saved before his mother truly died. A little boy, that looked far too much like his father.
But forever he would care for him.
*~*~*~*~ The End. *~*~*~*~
I'm happy for the review I got. It doesn't matter if it wasn't a praise or anything. And "me" thank you for your critismism, I would really like it if you told me how I could make it better, seeing as I just started it, and I want to make it as good as I'm able to. Thanks.