This is part of a subject in school we're doing

This is part of a subject in school we're doing. It's on poetry and I wrote a couple somewhat haiku things.2 of them are in french so I will put the translations next to them. I have them in french because I think they sound better that way.

Right now I have of the Valier and Valar : Yavanna,Manwe,Varda ,Este

Ulmo and Orome. More will be added later.

Constructive critism always welcome. I couldn't figure out how to put on those fancy accents n' stuff,so if any of you know how to could you tell me?

Disclaimer: I own nothing, all belongs to the genius Tolkein

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Yavanna Kemetari:

She who creates fruits

Lady of earth and seasons

Valier among the great

Manwe Sulimo

Rapidment son vent va ( Quickly his wind goes )

Dirigent des aigles et l'air ( Commander of eagles and air )

Seigneur de l'haleine d'Arda ( Lord of the breath of Arda)

Varda Elentari

Kindler of the stars

Beauty to be uncompared

Lady Elbereth

Este

Avec ses robes gris ( With her grey robes )

Sur les rivages de Lorellin ( On the shores of Lorellin )

Elle se dors jour et nuit ( She sleeps by day and night)

Ulmo :)

Lord of all waters

And every creature of sea

A great song of power

Orome

A hunter in woods

With a fast horse and a horn

All evil stands no chance

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