I'm back. Sorry its been so long. I seem to have lost my original account but I'm still writing. I've decided to rewrite my stories and I have a few other stories in mind for Inuyasha and company that I have thought about while I was gone for the past 6 ½ years. I hope you enjoy the newer versions. I'm trying to put more action into my stories so its not all dialogue.
I don't own INUYASHA, wish i did. but the genie strictly told me i could not wish for other peoples
belongings, so that ruled out my love.
Secret Admirer
Chapter One
Inuyasha always loved Kagome. What was there not to love. She was smart, beautiful,funny. And his best friend since preschool. But she would never know how he felt because he was dating Kikyo, his girlfriend of 2 years. Not that that was an excuse. She probably saw him as a brother for all he knew since they grew up together. That's usually what happens when you're as close as them for so long. But it hit him once they hit their junior year of High School. He was in love with his best friend. If he had only realized sooner how he felt about her. He started dating her cousin in the beginning of their sophomore year.
Kikyo was the splitting image of Kagome. Growing up people thought they were twins. Their mothers were identical twins which explained how cousins looked exactly the same, but they didn't find this out till they were in High School. Kikyo's mother was adopted into a rich community. She grew up rich, married rich, and passed on the snobbish attitude to her rich look alike daughter. Kagome's mother was adopted by a poor but loving family who owned the local shrine in town. She married the love of her life and had two beautiful children. Unfortunately, her husband passed on when Kagome was 2 and her mother died shortly after.
Kikyo made the relationship hard on Inuyasha. She demanded that he never talk to Kagome because she wasn't of there class like them. He never felt welcomed in Kikyo's group because though he was rich, he was ridiculed by some because he was the lovechild of his rich father and poor mother. So he chose to spend his free time during class breaks and lunch with Kagome and their gang. Kikyo chose to ignore this, so as long as nothing was said, everything worked out for them. His gang of friends consisted of wannabe ladies man Miroku, the varsity sports MVP Sango, her little sister Kirara, and the runt Shippo, besides Kagome, of course.
He tried to hide his true feelings for Kagome. It had been working so far, with some close calls here and there. But enough was enough. This was their last year of high school and he could not hide his feelings from her anymore. He had to confess, but how? One thought after another raced through his mind. Part of him wanted to just spit it out and another feared rejection. Finally an idea came to his mind.
"This might actually work" he thought to himself one day while going through his locker. He would give her notes telling her how he felt about her and she would never know it was him giving them to her. He wouldn't get rejected in front of others and he could still confess how he felt about her.
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Please read and review. All suggestions are acceptable. I'm still trying to rewrite the other six chapters and will get them out as soon as I can. This chapter is the first part of chapter one. If you want to read the original story to compare on my improvement search for secret admirer. Thank you to all the old fans and new.
Enjelikah