Disclamer: None of these characters are mine except for the ones i made up.
This is my second fic to ever wright so be nice and review it.
Its not the best story in the world, and i'm not the best writer, but its just an idea of something
weird i though of.
It was a normal night at the castle for Brooklyn. He was sitting on his normal perch watching the
world go by. Broadway and Angela were hanging out together, Goliath was with Elisa, Lexington
was with baby Alex and the Xanatos's, and Hudson and Brox were watching tv. Everyone had
things to do and someone to be with. Everyone except Brooklyn.
It had become Brooklyns routine to just sit at the top of the castle and think about the things he wanted.
He wanted to be noticed every once in a while, he wanted to find a girl to love him, but most of all he
wanted a friend. He wanted someone who was an outcast like him, who knew what it was like to be
alone, who would like him for him. He never expected to get what he wanted, but he loved his dreams.
One night as Brooklyn was on his perch, he decided to go for a midnight glide. As he was sailing over
the city he saw a shadowy creature near a building on the outskirts of the city. He figured he should
check it out. Slowly he glided to the ground and hid behind a corner. As he looked over the side of a
wall he saw Demonia. She was holding a strang necklace and what looked like a magic book. What
was she up too?As Demonia started setting up for what she was going to do, Brooklyn decided do
radio for help. "Guys i think you should get over here.Demonias up to something."
It took the clan and Elisa several minutes to reach Brooklyns destination. When they did Demonia was
almost finished preparing.As she started resiting a spell out of the book, the necklace started to glow,
and a strange light appeared in the middle of the sky.
"All right clan attack," bellowed Goliath. As they attacked ,Demonia became startled, and dropped the
necklace. "NO YOU FOOLS." "YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR DOING."
As the clan surrounded Demonia brooklyn grabbed to strang necklace and started examining it.
All the while the strang light grew larger and larger. Suddenly the light started spinning. It was spinning
like a wirlpool. The clan stared at it as the wirlpool started spinning faster and faster. What had Demonia
done?
The wirlpool was so fast that it started to suck in everything around it. "EVERYONE GET AWAY,
RETREAT!!!!" Goliath yelled. Everyone ran, but brooklyn was too close to the wirlpool. He couldn't
get away and the wirlpool sucked him in.
THE END OF BROOKLYN?
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF MY STORY SO FAR. LET ME KNOW IF I SHOULD
WRIGHT A SECOND CHAPTER OR IF THE STORY IS TRASH.
This is my second fic to ever wright so be nice and review it.
Its not the best story in the world, and i'm not the best writer, but its just an idea of something
weird i though of.
It was a normal night at the castle for Brooklyn. He was sitting on his normal perch watching the
world go by. Broadway and Angela were hanging out together, Goliath was with Elisa, Lexington
was with baby Alex and the Xanatos's, and Hudson and Brox were watching tv. Everyone had
things to do and someone to be with. Everyone except Brooklyn.
It had become Brooklyns routine to just sit at the top of the castle and think about the things he wanted.
He wanted to be noticed every once in a while, he wanted to find a girl to love him, but most of all he
wanted a friend. He wanted someone who was an outcast like him, who knew what it was like to be
alone, who would like him for him. He never expected to get what he wanted, but he loved his dreams.
One night as Brooklyn was on his perch, he decided to go for a midnight glide. As he was sailing over
the city he saw a shadowy creature near a building on the outskirts of the city. He figured he should
check it out. Slowly he glided to the ground and hid behind a corner. As he looked over the side of a
wall he saw Demonia. She was holding a strang necklace and what looked like a magic book. What
was she up too?As Demonia started setting up for what she was going to do, Brooklyn decided do
radio for help. "Guys i think you should get over here.Demonias up to something."
It took the clan and Elisa several minutes to reach Brooklyns destination. When they did Demonia was
almost finished preparing.As she started resiting a spell out of the book, the necklace started to glow,
and a strange light appeared in the middle of the sky.
"All right clan attack," bellowed Goliath. As they attacked ,Demonia became startled, and dropped the
necklace. "NO YOU FOOLS." "YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR DOING."
As the clan surrounded Demonia brooklyn grabbed to strang necklace and started examining it.
All the while the strang light grew larger and larger. Suddenly the light started spinning. It was spinning
like a wirlpool. The clan stared at it as the wirlpool started spinning faster and faster. What had Demonia
done?
The wirlpool was so fast that it started to suck in everything around it. "EVERYONE GET AWAY,
RETREAT!!!!" Goliath yelled. Everyone ran, but brooklyn was too close to the wirlpool. He couldn't
get away and the wirlpool sucked him in.
THE END OF BROOKLYN?
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF MY STORY SO FAR. LET ME KNOW IF I SHOULD
WRIGHT A SECOND CHAPTER OR IF THE STORY IS TRASH.