I just read this book, and loved it. I don't own any of the characters, so on and so forth.
*sigh* ok so I've made some adjustments, I probably shouldn't have posted this until I was completely satisfied with it.
Chapter 1: A Flat Tire
Another long day at Southglenn is over... Sigh. As I shut my locker door and turn to see Holland at her own locker across the hall, watching her in her mirror. I smile and wave but Holland blushes and looks away. God she's so cute! After getting all her stuff, she turns to look at me and puts her hand to her ear in a call me sign and I nod and smile at her. Since its Friday, we'll finally be able to hang out for a while without having to worry about anyone catching us. I watch as she walks out the exit toward her car, after letting her get a good heads start, I head out for my own car.
As I approach my blue neon I realize I have a flat… again. I kneel down in front of the deflated tire and sigh. They sliced it again, and this was my last spare too. I stand up and reach into my bag for my cell phone, but before I'm able to call anyone a car pulls up beside me and i freeze.
"Hey! Need a ride?" I look up at the unfamiliar voice and grimace. I don't recognize the driver, the one who hollered at me, but the other two, the one in the passenger seat and the one in the back, I've seen them in the halls, staring at me, or more like glaring… What are these guys playing at? I take a step back and plaster on a small smile. "Thanks, but I'm ok, I'm just gonna have my brother bring me a spare". Please just leave! The back door closest to me opens and one of the guys I recognize steps out. My smile fades and I take another step back and back into my car. Shit! "Come on", he says as his mouth pulls up into a sneer, "We'll take you wherever you need to go." Instinctively, I reach for my car door, just in case escape is necessary, "Seriously, I'll be fine, you guys go ahead, thanks for the offer though." But as I grab the door handle the guy lunges at me, slamming both hands on my car on either side of me, pinning me to my car door. "We can do this the easy way, or the hard way, which would you prefer?" I shrink away from him, as far away as possible, and let go of the handle, bringing my hands in front of me, as if to defend myself. The guy just smiles and grabs my wrist, then half drags me to their car and shoves me in. Then he slides in after me. Right away I reach for the handle of the other door and try to open it, but of course it doesn't work. The guys laugh as they drive away with me, they're captive.
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