Hey, guys! Yeah, I took down the old story. No one really liked it too much. But I'm bringing it back for a second to talk about the one, the ONLY, "The Loud House gets louder" by Lantastic Loud! He said within his own comments section (because apparently I'm the only one on this site who knows how to use the PM tool to respond to a review and he needs to inflate the comment count anyway) that I should do this, so guess what? I'm frickin' doing it! Now, I most likely won't make another chapter for this unless you guys ask me to. But with that being said, let's dive into this dumpster fire.

HOW ORIGINAL

Hey, y'all know what would be fun? If we took the Loud house, and ADDED SIBLINGS! Because literally no one has done that on FFN EVER! *cough* Laney, Riley (kinda, depending on how you look at it), T.K., Lexi, Leslie, etc. *cough* But hey, at least he's adding more than one. He's adding 4. Each as bland as the last.

Here's a quick rundown of each from oldest to youngest:

Oh, wait, never mind! We don't know any of their ages except for Logan, who is 9! Wanna know how we know he's nine? Here's the context: (and yes, he writes this in script format. As if that's necessary or even a good thing.)

Lonni: What'cha doing?

Logan: Just reading a fanfiction about a girl who turns 8.

Lonni: Ooh! That's your age!

Logan: I'm 9...

Oh, oka- wait, WHAT? Are you THIS lazy?! 'Reading a finfiction about a girl who turns 8?' Is that the plot of the fanfiction? This has got to b e the most forced exposition of any kind, EVER! And he doesn't even do it for the other characters! But let's assume Lonni is the oldest, followed by Logan, then Larura (yes, LARURA. LA-RU-RA. I half-choked on it as I read it out loud), then Lukas.

LONNI: Leni. Just... Leni. Leni is still in this story, but Lonni is basically a clone of her.

LOGAN: Likes fanfiction and all that jazz. Not much besides that.

LARURA: Also a Leni clone, but younger and without the kindness or interest in fashion. She's just plain dumb. Her class gets a new student called Larissa and THE FIRST THING THAT COMES TO HER MIND IS 'OH CRAP MAYBE SHE'S A LONG LOST SISTER BECAUSE HER NAME STARTS WITH L LOL.'

LUKAS: Likes to sleep in. And virtually nothing else.

STORY CONTENT

Okay, excusing the poor grammar as best as possible here, the story itself STILL sucks. Virtually nothing happens in each 500-word chapter. Oh, sorry, the first is actually about 150 at best. There's not even much of any continuation! Yeah, in a later chapter, Lola tells Larura (still can't say that name) that Larissa isn't a long lost sister. As if we didn't already know that. Death can't come soon enough. These characters aren't well made, and Lonni manages to collect 1,000,000 tickets with 25 tokens, at which point I call Sue.

THE AUTHOR

The guy has this crap on amino too, and talks like he has any sort of fanbase on here. Mate, the story has 0 faves, 0 followers, and 6 reviews, literally all but one of which are negative. And the last one's yours. Don't be all "here are some of the future chapters" when the story's following could be multipled by literally 1,000,000 and still nobody would care.

Overall, this guy literally asked for it, and I felt I had to deliver. Again, most likely won't update this unless any of you request me too. See y'all on my other stories!