The Tears that Froze Time
Hey all! I love you all! It's me, Elle again! (Ria) Or simply Shirei if you're Hinami, which I know you're reading this.
I don't know if you all will like this story, but I do hope you review nevertheless. The author will be very happy! (Me, Elle) Anyway, I got this idea in Math Class, if you're wondering, where the teacher was just droning on …and on…and on… about Algebra. Ugh, the horrors. I'm really sorry that I'm not posting Years Gone By chapter 3! There's no inspiration, even though I'm getting a lot of lovely and delightful reviews from all of you! I just can't put it into words!
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Dedication: I'm sorry this took so long for me to thank you, but the reviewers of His Favourite Colour!
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This is also dedicated to astrid, an anonymous reviewer who has reviewed me many times on my stories. And thanks to my dearest friends, Hinami and Misa for always reviewing.. Thank you so much.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gakuen Alice. If I did, I'll tell you all! Maybe it's going to be my amazing birthday gift in a months' time. (Nah, not gonna happen) This idea is mine, though.
/ Chapter 1-Prologue/
Tears are used to show emotions, whether happy or sad. They are used for many occasions. It may annoy someone or bring another to their knees. But who knew that tears could also do something dangerous, something unpredictable? Sakura Mikan was an orphan, who lived alone. Her grandfather had died a few years back, and she had nothing to remember him by except the little house they inhabited. She was a normal girl, who didn't cry much, but when she did…it was a disaster.
Time freezes.
Who is this Mikan Sakura, you ask? Not many knew about her ability. She was always in solitude, without family or many friends. This was merely to protect her from crying. Little did they know that it was the reason that brought out more of her tears, thus freezing time.
What happens when the time freezes? People breathe, people live, but they don't move. Everything stops, like they've been frozen cold on a winter day. And that's what they were and that's what happened.
Except... they were frozen in time.
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Meet Natsume Hyuuga, a boy far from ordinary. He was always quiet and alone. He worked alone on his missions that included from protecting royalty, to assassination, to researching and obtaining. His alias was the Black Cat, for he was known for his speed and agility. His mission was simple this time.
Obtain and protect the girl who could freeze time. Find her and stop the power, and stop her from crying. Keep her smile.
Strange, much? He was curious and strong, and that was why he was chosen for this mission. He would earn big money, as well as give protection to his family, especially his little sister.
This was for his family, not for his curiosity.
Unfortunately, there was a downfall. Other people wanted to capture the girl too, and use her powers for their own selfish good. He was ordered to prevent that, whether by life or death. And thus began his risk of a mission.
He had to find the girl first.
After all, this was a race against time.
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Author's Note: I'm starting to like writing short chapters. Bear with it with me okay? If you guys don't like it, then I'm going to delete this story. So give me feedback! Sorry if this is bad, since you have to wait and still get a short chapter in return. :( Chapter 2 might take a while, so please wait patiently! I would like to work on Years Gone by and finish it first. I have a question. Do you want Years Gone By to have three chapters or four? If it has four chapters, it'll be a short chapter but the update will be quick, form one day to five days. If it has three, it will be a long chapter but the wait will take longer. (One week to two and a half weeks) Please post your idea and suggestion. Thank you! Remember to not complain on the shortness of this chapter. I promise that future chapters will be longer.
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Shirei
Ria departing! (Elle)
